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AMOGUS
And the first half of this chapter is where you completely lose me.
I wonder if these changes to Spike are temporary. And after they were off do you think he’ll keep coming back to human to transforming him I wonder if this effect he has on Males Temporarily but they act like drug attic always looking for the next fix
I'm not sure I'm okay with Spike Aged stuff, I mean he's older but only physically, not mentally, he still has the mind of a kids
Yea, not a fan of that crap with spike. Damn near pedo shit there, and they all know spikes true adolescent form, so for them to lust after him just for a body change is both creepy and downgrading of them. His body may have been forced to mature or something, but his mind obviously dident. They need to stop being so fucking hair brained and think for once. Not to mention that so called guard forcing herself on him after watching the change happen, it was practically rape since he even told her to stop.
Noice
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I don't think Alex would has this effect on other males. Remember he has touched other males before (Big Mac, Carrot Cake, etc.) and nothing happened to them.
Magic?
So he’s superhuman?
Technically, it wouldn’t be her first time.
F*ck it.
What did they whisper?
So did Luna actually buy the theatrics or she simply play along as well? Because if so, bravo that was quite the performance.
Another great chapter. Fun, plot and plot all around!
Real respect for giving Spike more of a role in this story/chapter, and not cheapening his real character growth by not just turning him into some lust beast.
Looking forward to that development.
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I knew that part was risky, but I tried to make it clear by having Twilight tell him the ponies weren't actually sure of his true age. And then have Spike tell her he didn't feel like a child, given his feelings for Rarity. If it helps, know that I'm not a fan of foalcon, and have taken pains not to include it in my stories.
Okay that bit at the end with Luna was hilarious
Okay just keep this things between us,,
Spike growing suddenly make the story feels...
strange in my book...
just make some changeling or even queen herself coming to ponyvile..
Or make him kidnapped, genderbend discord or even make nightmare moon or daybreaker from another reality appears, want to rules the equestria but endup being yandere to alex...
well Spike now might start a reign of 'terror' of his own now. How long before he goes after Rarity, Will AJ finally take a ride on Alex or will Spike tickle her fancy.
Can't wait to find out.
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I actually love the part with Luna... every single tidbit she and her twin fem thestrals had done and for that I saluted so hard for the MC getting some action with Luna I dented my own skull and became DUM.... UwU
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Ok.
The fun has been Tripled!
Nice use on roleplay
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Luna's social skills have been crippled from her stay on the Moon for the last thousand years, so she's still learning about irony and sarcasm. That, and...she's not very bright. But she's getting better!
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Thank you all! Hopefully, the next installment won't disappoint!
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Excellent! *guitar riff*
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Shhh! Don't reveal my notes!
Edit: Thank you!
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Roger that
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Isn't that risk making her angry when she founds out she got play?
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Most certainly! But let's hope being sexually pounded senseless will mitigate her anger!
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I would say he trick her into sleeping with her but…well that one was on her, he only trick her into giving him a blowjob because he really didn't though she was that gullable, and she pretty much was seeking to basically torture him so…they are kind of even in that regard so even if angered, eggs on her. She approach him aggressevely and got screw because of her short temper and complete lack of subtleness
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Hee hee...I don't think that trick would have worked on any other mare!
I'm going to have to agree with others about the Spike thing. It just felt weird. And I think the whole scene was rushed. It probably feels additionally weird because usually there's only one "protagonist with a dick" in HiE porn stories like this.
I guess the unasked question everyone wants to know is: why?
The scene with the teenaged ponies was endearing. Throwing them into the air (and then catching them) was almost cute. I'm sure the colts enjoyed it because they probably haven't experienced anything like a thrill ride if they've only been in Ponyville their whole lives.
The bossy teen mare... Diamond Tiara? Or is she still Apple Bloom's age in this world?
Then there's Princess Luna. Holy shit I laughed so hard. The ineffective magic, the gullibly naive alicorn. Twins! Now that's a nice scene. I hope they have another "fight" soon.
Thanks for posting.
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The scene with Spike was basically an experiment. I knew I had to address his feelings for Rarity and how she'd been with the alien, and I couldn't simply ignore him once I'd already had him in the story. Regardless of his true age, Spike is a noble character who would not take advantage of anyone, least of all his sister. I did want him to have some sexual release, hence the scene with the unnamed mare, but it will be seen if there are any other encounters with other mares. We'll see where the story goes.
The part with the teenagers was first written very differently, and very dark. Alex was quite hostile to them, but after writing it to completion and sleeping on it, I decided I couldn't let it stand, and rewrote it to its present state. Glad you liked it. The bossy teen wasn't Diamond, she was an unnamed teen older than the school-age fillies of Diamond's class.
Writing Luna was a blast! I went with the idea she's still somewhat naive to social queues, and oblivious to irony and sarcasm due to her thousand-year exile. But she's learning, bless her heart! What she'll do after she finds out she was duped is anyone's guess but given Alex's invulnerability to Equestrian magic, I foresee the best she'll be able to do is have another romp in the sheets. And we'll probably see those hot twins again as well!
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This mare from Chapter Two:
Edit: I see the confusion. I misspelled the mare's name in the later chapter. Fixed!
Amogus
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"what is this 'roleplay' thou speaketh of?" 😇
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FYI: if you reply to a comment from the story page and said comment is not on the latest chapter, they don't get notified of your response. Gotta do it from that chapter's comment section. This is also why your response is on the wrong chapter relative to what you're responding to. 👍
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I was not aware of that. Good to know!
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Not so long ago we finally got rid of the VHS copy. 😉🦌
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Yep, practical (accidental) demonstration just now lol.
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Didn't Twilight hatched Spike when she took the entrance exam for Celestia's school? Since he's slightly younger than Twi, I can see him being 18+ even though he has a small body.
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That is an excellent point! We tend to think of Spike as being younger, but the math checks out! Foalcon avoided!
This was beyond epic I hope her and her sister officially join.
A hobbit comes of age at 33. Who’s to say Spike doesn’t age differently from ponies?
Loving this fic!! Can't wait for more of Mirabella and Isabella!!
OOHHH...Rarity !!! What will you think of your little "Spikey-Wikey now ?