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Well, crap!!!
Hope they can fix all this!!
And that alex becomes a dad
She currently isn't?
This is pretty bad. If she is in a human form like AJ, having no Equestrian magic is understandable. But she is still mostly a pony form, having no magic at all does not sound good at all.
Oh boy. What's going to become of Rainbow when the effect wears off? Will the effect wear off?
Oh, Rainbow, Rainbow... Poor, poor Rainbow. It's not your destiny to conquer heaven now. Learn to live like a human being.
And Sgt. Murphy is looking at Rainbow Dash and says "This is what happens when you don't think ahead and only with your instincts to do the Stupid!"
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Yea, to much.
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Yeah, not interested in listening to someone who's too stupid to know the difference between 'to' and 'too.'
Dun dun dun!
Oh snap this was wild I hope Rainbow will be ok.
Here we go, the consequences of being a thot that wouldn't listen.
I feel bad for her, and I don't feel bad for her. Would definitely make sure Fluttershy and Mac see what they help her do to herself.
Well well well
If it isn't the consequence of her actions.
Now, to see what happens with Alex's little group and RD.
AMONGUS
ding ding ding ding ding di- di- ding
I guess were both since I read your "crazy" work. Anyways, chapter 5 and up was going great, not until the orgy part. I'm more of the faithful type, and I gotta tell you, knowing that all of the characters in your story are whores and man whores. I don't get hard no more.
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No, no, NO...they're SLUTS. Whores do what they do for MONEY, or in this case, bits. Sluts are cock-hungry all the time, but in this depiction, are ONLY so because of Alex's erotic touch. I tried to make it clear in this telling that each pony's personality went through a significant change once they encountered the Human, and I left it up to the reader to decide if that change was a good one.
I have yet to reach the actual climax of the tale, for estrus season is still to come, and during that time there will be VAST changes throughout the Town, and not all of them will be good. I know it seems all random, but I was only half-joking about being crazy (well, if I'm being honest, not completely joking) as there IS a method to my madness and all the random strings will reach an end. This isn't one of my Adventure tales where I leave the ending to the readers' imagination; this is a Porn romp with Comediac overtones, so no enigmatic endings here.
As far as your "losing your wood," to that I say 'meh', you can't please everyone, and it's foolish to try. I have many other tales on offer, so perhaps you'll find something there more suited to your tastes. If not, or even if so, no matter...thanks for reading this far, and hope to engage your interest in the future!
Yeah bud, keep up your passion. You made little johnsons stand up tall.*Salute* If your done maybe I can request if you make a (Dante inferno x MLP) Would love it to see, instead of him going to heaven at the end he simply and strangely got TP'ed to Equestria. The mane 6 changed him and made him a pure man, a protector, and a lover. I can write stories well so, maybe if you want, we can collab. I'll do the correcting and cleaning of the story while you write the plot.
Please update
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Okay...
will it continue soon?