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TheDriderPony


"Only the most subtle of references." -No fanfiction writer ever

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Sunset Shimmer is going on a date.
Wallflower Blush is spending the evening with friends.
One of them has it wrong.


A very lately written entry for \o/ Scampy's SunFlower Shipping Contest \o/

No sex, just a dirty joke but who knows where people are going to draw the line.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

Hey, hi! Each author can only submit one story to the contest, though of course thank you so very much for writing more SunFlower \o/

Based on the description of your other story, can we assume that's the one you want us to include in the judging discussion?

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Shoot. I could have sworn it said you could write multiple.
Yes, go for the other one. It's better.

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It's better.

I've read both and I'm debating which one is.

Either way, good job!

Now that she was serious, it only made things more awkward that human and pony courting customs had evolved along very different paths with only a few shared traditions. She still cringed when she thought back to her first months on two legs when she'd tried to entice a boy by nipping at his ear. That was a lesson she'd learned from quickly (and a video she hoped would never resurface).

I am deeply amused by this.

So grateful for this contest as it has given me all this delicious food. I absolutely adore every word of this and am seriously looking forward to reading your actual entry later.

A small 'aww' came from the people in the seat behind her. Wallflower agreed. The talking plant on-stage was indeed adorable.

Story title checks out.

A small 'aww' came from the people in the seat behind her. Wallflower agreed. The talking plant on-stage was indeed adorable.

Rarity in a cunning disguise? :raritystarry:

I almost feel like this should have a sequel or more chapters. If nothing else, to see how the other Rainbooms react to Sunset telling them that it was, in fact, the first date and that Wallflower didn't think they had been dating before that. 🤣

Her other friends had all cancelled. Family issues, conflicting activities, last-minute shift changes. One by one dropping out and leaving just two would-be thespians left.

However, stuff like this really reinforces Wallflower's confusion. Sunset is either telling lies of her friends' activities, or she genuinely did invite them to go with her on her date with Wallflower. Which would be weird.

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Nah, they likely cancelled sequentially with rather obvious excuses. Do remember they were with her while she was asking Wallflower to the date through the phone, so they would know what to do.

FUCKING FIREEEE!!!!!!! GREAT WORK!

I like it, except that Sunset reading Wallflowers mind at the end is not ok

"Oh." Wallflower wasn't sure what she thought about that. On one hand, that saved the world, but at the cost of such a beautiful and interesting plant. "Is there a version where Audrey II and the humans make up and learn to live together?" That'd be nice. Harmony between plants and people.

"I don't think so." Sunset took a sip of her water, but put it down quickly as her eyes widened with a realization. "Hey, if it doesn't exist, maybe you could write it."

Yes! Nothing is as romantic as a good fixfic! :trollestia: (insert extra trollestia emojis)

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