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Before I read this, I must know: What's the death tag for?

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Presumably, the other ponies that were on the zeppelin. (Haven't read it either and don't plan to, this just felt obvious)

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Sunburst's father, Sunspot.

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

I'm going to be honest, I only read the epilogue because I knew there was going to be pregnancy in it.

That is a rather spicy cover, though. I assume you had it cropped because cameltoe was showing?

Damn! You don't disappoint, do you? Great sinful goodness right here!

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Damn! You don't disappoint, do you?

Nice little story overall. Good blend of plot and porn.

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To be fair, it was never tagged as porn.
(Not that I'm above writing the odd, one-off clopfic, mind you.)
But I find erotica to be so much better when the sex serves the story, rather than the reverse.

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Yeah, I was using the term "porn" rather loosely. You're right, though. I much prefer "stories that have sex in them" over "sex stories."

Always a pleasure to see you upload a new story, also hope you're staying safe doing well and having a good weekend

This was an excellent story with a satisfying conclusion. I love how filling his father's shoes became quite literal at the end.

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Just like in the show!

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Your cigar is full.

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Think of it as ordering a replacement.

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I absolutely love these kind of stories with survival themes in them. Awesome story

If this was on the rankings sheet I'd give it max points.