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awesome chapter mate keep it up :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Before I read this, I must know: What's the death tag for?

Presumably, the other ponies that were on the zeppelin. (Haven't read it either and don't plan to, this just felt obvious)

Sunburst's father, Sunspot.

awesome chapter mate keep it up:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I'm going to be honest, I only read the epilogue because I knew there was going to be pregnancy in it. :twilightblush:

That is a rather spicy cover, though. I assume you had it cropped because cameltoe was showing?

Fun Fact: it's actually very easy to design aircraft to be effectively lightning-proof and they've been built that way since at least the 1930s.

The hell dude?! I didn't ask for feels with my porn!
This is so you! :facehoof:
Good job!

Ok, I'm continuing my read.:pinkiehappy:

Damn! You don't disappoint, do you? Great sinful goodness right here!:moustache:


Damn! You don't disappoint, do you?

Neat story so far. One minor nit:

"Here, use the rudder peddles,"

The word you're looking for here is "pedals".

Wow. A porn story with ... you know ... plot (and I do mean the literary kind).

Nice little story overall. Good blend of plot and porn.

To be fair, it was never tagged as porn.
(Not that I'm above writing the odd, one-off clopfic, mind you.)
But I find erotica to be so much better when the sex serves the story, rather than the reverse.

Yeah, I was using the term "porn" rather loosely. You're right, though. I much prefer "stories that have sex in them" over "sex stories."

Always a pleasure to see you upload a new story, also hope you're staying safe doing well and having a good weekend

Gotta say I'm really digging this fic. The pacing especially. You're doing a great job building up all that sexual tension.

This was an excellent story with a satisfying conclusion. I love how filling his father's shoes became quite literal at the end.

So, giving Sunburst a father just to kill him off in the first chapter?


Your cigar is full.


Think of it as ordering a replacement.

I absolutely love these kind of stories with survival themes in them. Awesome story

If this was on the rankings sheet I'd give it max points.

Nice fic so far, but I found a minor typo you may want to fix.

If it were and other woman, in any other situation, he might have been able to enjoy the experience.

Very nice so far. That said, there's some stuff you may want to edit.

And he was paralyzed by fear to do anything but remain as still as possible and hop she didn't wake up to her son groping her.


"Whatever. It nothing you haven't already seen."


But the didn't step out of the tub. She turned around and squatted in the water in front of him.


Aren't they unicorns?
Why they cannot use magic?

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