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awesome chapter mate keep it up
Before I read this, I must know: What's the death tag for?
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Presumably, the other ponies that were on the zeppelin. (Haven't read it either and don't plan to, this just felt obvious)
nice
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Sunburst's father, Sunspot.
awesome chapter mate keep it up
awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
I'm going to be honest, I only read the epilogue because I knew there was going to be pregnancy in it.
That is a rather spicy cover, though. I assume you had it cropped because cameltoe was showing?
Fun Fact: it's actually very easy to design aircraft to be effectively lightning-proof and they've been built that way since at least the 1930s.
The hell dude?! I didn't ask for feels with my porn!
This is so you!
Good job!
Ok, I'm continuing my read.
Damn! You don't disappoint, do you? Great sinful goodness right here!
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Neat story so far. One minor nit:
The word you're looking for here is "pedals".
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Fixed.
Wow. A porn story with ... you know ... plot (and I do mean the literary kind).
Nice little story overall. Good blend of plot and porn.
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To be fair, it was never tagged as porn.
(Not that I'm above writing the odd, one-off clopfic, mind you.)
But I find erotica to be so much better when the sex serves the story, rather than the reverse.
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Yeah, I was using the term "porn" rather loosely. You're right, though. I much prefer "stories that have sex in them" over "sex stories."
Always a pleasure to see you upload a new story, also hope you're staying safe doing well and having a good weekend
Gotta say I'm really digging this fic. The pacing especially. You're doing a great job building up all that sexual tension.
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Tis my favorite kind!
This was an excellent story with a satisfying conclusion. I love how filling his father's shoes became quite literal at the end.
So, giving Sunburst a father just to kill him off in the first chapter?
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Just like in the show!
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Your cigar is full.
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Think of it as ordering a replacement.
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I absolutely love these kind of stories with survival themes in them. Awesome story
If this was on the rankings sheet I'd give it max points.
Nice fic so far, but I found a minor typo you may want to fix.
Very nice so far. That said, there's some stuff you may want to edit.
"hope".
"It's".
"she".
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Fixed. Ty.
Aren't they unicorns?
Why they cannot use magic?
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