Sunburst and his mother get stranded on a tropical island.
awesome chapter mate keep it up
Fun Fact: it's actually very easy to design aircraft to be effectively lightning-proof and they've been built that way since at least the 1930s.
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Ok, I'm continuing my read.
Neat story so far. One minor nit:
"Here, use the rudder peddles,"
The word you're looking for here is "pedals".
10808121Fixed.
So, giving Sunburst a father just to kill him off in the first chapter?
awesome chapter mate keep it up
Fun Fact: it's actually very easy to design aircraft to be effectively lightning-proof and they've been built that way since at least the 1930s.
The hell dude?! I didn't ask for feels with my porn!
This is so you!
Good job!
Ok, I'm continuing my read.
Neat story so far. One minor nit:
The word you're looking for here is "pedals".
10808121
Fixed.
So, giving Sunburst a father just to kill him off in the first chapter?