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Good story but I'm gonna dislike because I felt his balls being destroyed without the pleasure
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Well I thank you for the fair shake.
If I do a story like this again, I'll make sure to better in that department next time.
I'm at least glad you liked the story portion!
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It was a good fic story wise up until that point,but any other form of shock gore (idk if that's what it's called) would've definentally felt better generally speaking. It was a good storyline but I don't think that I'll ever read anything with (literal) ball busting. Have a good day/night/evening/afternoon
Well holy shit. I guess 'crazy' is a bit of an understatement. Truth be told, I was a little iffy on the 'consensual' part of the theme for most of the story, but I suppose in the end it really was. And the Insane part was more that fulfilled. Other than that, some typos here and then and unless I just plain missed something, I have no idea who Evelyn is or why she's taking Jamesy and Erica's kids for a week. Overall a fairly solid story.
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Your comments about the consensual part are true. I wanted to make it abundantly clear that in the end, he is going to give the insane girl everything she wants and more.
I probably should have clarified that Evelyn is Erica’s sister. I should have wrote “auntie” or “aunt” somewhere but it’s too late now.
Thanks for reading and this opportunity!