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Nightskies


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Comments ( 19 )

This is pretty good for a first story. There are some grammar errors here and there but overall it's pretty good.

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Thank you. I'll try and work on those in the future.

I really liked it, not many stories on here use the Mommy dynamic this well. I can't wait to see what you do next.

Decent for a first fic, but one question, was Flutters wearing a mask, or did he just not recognize her?

Not criticizing or anything, just a bit confused

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Wearing a mask. Sorry. Should've made that more clean.

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Thank you. Just wrote this for the contest. I hope to write more.

Damn that was hot. I want more of hot MILF fluttershy and her son. Fantastic work.

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Thank you. I just never saw any fics about this idea and thought I would write one for it.

I must say that for your first fic you did a great job and I really want to see what your next fic will be

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Oh. Thank you. Been thinking of something for the next fic. Not sure what It will be yet. Hope its good.

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If you need suggestions I can give you a few

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I'm always open to hearing suggestions. Feel free to at any time.

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ok, the first thought i had is that a zecora tribe zebra came to ponyville in the middle of the hot season
others are much to rule 63 specifically in the male versions of the 7 manes, luna and celestia, for example: starlight giving a "reward" at Dusk in the form of showing her gratitude,
the royal brothers Solaris and Artemis arrange a special "meeting" with Dragon Lord Ember and Queen Novo.
A series of short chapters of the various exciting adventures of Sunset Glare during her days at Canterlot High.
an idea with Spike out that Smolder giving him a pretty graphic sex education about dragons

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Thank you for the suggestions.

"Yeah. So did I, mommy." he smiles at her as he walks home with her, the cool air hitting them both as they walk the path home. They probably won't speak of this again, but he didn't mind. It was only for tonight that they were strangers.

I have a feeling that this won't be the "only night" they do this. :raritywink:

Would love to know where to find the original picture.

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Art from Snuddy. NSFW artist. Hope that helps.

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