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Ranma Saotome is no more and is now a married Pegasus in Canterlot, his wife Luna by his side, his female half now his twin sister, yet how did happen? Join Ranma as he tells the tale of his troubled past and the greatest change to his life!

Disclaimer: I don’t own MLP: FIM, it’s products, or anything connected to it nor do I own any character from the Ranma ½ series. I do however own the Fan Fiction made High School Celestial Moon High along with its classes. I also own the characters James Kunai and Clifford ‘Cliff’ Mountain. As always this is just made for fun of writing and the enjoyment of many readers. Please enjoy.

A/N: This take place after season 2 Ep. 25-26 of MLP: FIM and the last chapter of the Ranma ½ Manga Series. However for the Ranma ½ opening piece I’ll be changing the ending of the manga a bit to match up with this story. Basically this is a Ranma’s fed up fan fiction for the first few chapters then it’ll get better as the story goes. Till then enjoy.

Cover art by Me

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 176 )

*le me* Hmm... ranma crossover :rainbowhuh: .... Let's look.

:twilightoops: WALL OF TEXT!

Might I suggest reading a manual or three? And maybe finding a proofreader?

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Gotta agree with that. If you ever format it I will read it.
But it makes me twitchy about continuing my own Ranma/MLP fic as soon as my bachelor thesis is done.:twilightsmile:

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:rainbowderp: I will try to get on this as best I can you two but currently I'm kind of trying to get another of my fictions corrected so I'll just have to add this one to my to do list. :ajsleepy: Sigh, I fell like I'm about to pull a Twilight Sparkle at some point. :pinkiecrazy:

Edit

Okay... well... this was an easy fix. :twilightblush: If you see anymore mistakes on the other chapters let me know. Thanks you two.:twilightsmile:

You had me... then you lost me. No offense to your writing ability, but I don't like the way he left Akane. Why couldn't you have it be her instead? I thought their awkwardness was adorable. :pinkiesad2: You do need a proofreader too.

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Oh boy I knew this was coming. Well best to get on with this and put up a Blog on this. I'll be putting it up soon so keep watch.

After a second try: I like the story idea after reading more into it, but you need to go into more detail regarding why the citizens of Equestria ended up on earth in the first place. Also, why the wait? Can they not find Discord? It's not really clear. I hope all the characters will make it back (including a certain old green pony). As for the reason Ranma is stuck as a girl. :pinkiesick: That's just... I'm not sure what your logic is here.

Paragraph breaks dude.

Learn about them, use them.

Always make a new paragraph when someone new starts to speak.

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After a second try: I like the story idea after reading more into it, but you need to go into more detail regarding why the citizens of Equestria ended up on earth in the first place. Also, why the wait? Can they not find Discord? It's not really clear. I hope all the characters will make it back (including a certain old green pony). As for the reason Ranma is stuck as a girl. :pinkiesick: That's just... I'm not sure what your logic is here.

:ajsmug:Well Funky here are your answers you've been wanting. :fluttershysad: Sadly other items have also been brought to my attention at this time as so they too will hopefully be answered for you in the next chapter. :twilightsheepish: As for my logic on how Ranma had become locked is quite simple. He's cursed to become female, think about it. If you still don't understand it'll be explained a bit better in the up coming chapter. :pinkiehappy: Till then please enjoy.

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Discord who creamed “No!”

Pfft... I can see him doing that, he can be so random! :rainbowlaugh:

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:facehoof: Screamed, not creamed but... :pinkiehappy: I'll go with it!

Why should he have to wait five years to know the truth?
Ranma not being able to handle the truth is a tad ooc what with all he/she has been through learning that Kasumi is really Princess Luna the alicorn would be about par for the course with Ranma life.
So why five years?:rainbowhuh:

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Me: These are good questions and worthy of some answers. :ajsmug:

Why should he have to wait five years to know the truth?

Me: Well this is quite simple to explain. It's true that Ranma had gone through hundreds if not millions of odd and magical things in his life but in all honesty Ranma needs a chance to settle into a somewhat normal life around those he can truly call friends and trust no matter what before he is told the shocking truth. Also this will give Kasumi (AKA Luna) time to take care of her human family, Ranma's family, and the hundreds if not thousands of other issues put into poor Ranma's lap by Genma for his own greedy and uncaring gut.

Genma: Hey!:ajbemused::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::rainbowdetermined2::duck::twilightangry2: Uh... um... carry on.

Me: That I will. As I was saying Genma had caused Ranma enough strife that many things need to change before Ranma can ever learn his love is actually an all powerful yet mischievous Alicorn Princess. If left unchecked they'll only cause Ranma more strife for him in the end. Also I think it would sadly push Ranma over the edge knowing his love is a Alicorn and not an actual human being and Kasumi truly loves him for who he is not what he is. -Looks to the girls.- Girl if you would be so kind as to escort Genma away and wipe his memory.

:twilightsmile:Sure.

Genma: No wait I... -Mind Wiped- Where was I again? -Walks off-

Me: Sigh. Now as for the truth well it's because the people (Ponies) of the town (Ponyville and Canterlot) need to gain trust in Ranma and if the people don't trust him well then they feel he'd be causing them to come into danger they don't want. So it's actually a trust thing and because the Princesses wants to make sure they find Discord and have him choose to come with them or not. Not force him to come.

:rainbowhuh:Couldn't you have said that in the first place?

Me: Um well uh... Look it's a Wonderbolt's recruiter!

:rainbowderp:Where?! -Flies off-

:twilightoops:That was mean you know.

Me: Did you want to explain to her why I had to do a long explanation?

:twilightblush:Good point.

So why five years?

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Me: This is mostly do to law issues and Ranma's multiple fiance issues. Basically Luna and Celestia has to make sure both the Japanese and American governments of this world are on their side should the Nerima Wrecking Crew ever show up, also they want to make sure that any Fiances Ranma didn't already take care of are permanently gone and with Kasumi knowing how stubborn Ranma's mother Nodoka is she has be to make sure that Ranma is no longer part of the Saotome Clan. Also here's a small spoiler for you.:pinkiehappy:

SPOILER ALERT!
I am planning on explaining more about the five year issue in yet another Interlude. I'll also be showing what the NWC have been up to along with some Luna meddling. So be ready, it'll come in another six chapters.:yay:

Damn you and this awesome fic. I shoulda gone to bed an hour and a half ago, but I can't stop reading. Stopping now, cuz I can barely keep my eyes open. Will resume in the morning.

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NEVER! :flutterrage: :rainbowlaugh: Na, just kidding. Remember to like and favorite please. Oh and if you like this fiction try my other fiction Hayseed. Thanks!:pinkiehappy:

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Thank you for the explanation it was informative.

1312912Kay. I just finished this chapter finally. And yay i have my laptop back, so i can actually type up the new chapters for my fic. Been grounded for like a week, and my prewritten chapters are starting to pile up.:twilightsheepish:

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Ouch. Glad you got your Laptop back and I know how you feel on adding new chapters to a fiction. Hope you have fun writing your new chapters.

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Your very welcome. -Bows.-

1316507Thanks. Unfortunately, I keep seeing more stories updated whenever I go to write new chapters. It's annoying, but I cannot resist the opportunity to read new chapters. Speaking of which, how often can I expect new chapters of this to come out? This is one of like two ranma 1/2 crossovers on this site, and the other one is on a special hiatus, until the author is done grieving for her lost cat.

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I think you should take out the mention of the separation from the first chapter. That way, readers can go "Oh noes! Which pony will he pick?"

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:unsuresweetie: Well, yes I could do that but sadly that would rewriting the story and making sure that readers like yourself stay on the edge of your seat, or you could be asking yourself, "Wait, I thought he wanted Kasumi/Luna? Why is Fluttershy/Summer interested in only Ranko? How did the split even happen?" this is what I really want to do. I want to keep you guys on your toes and wondering what I'm going to come up with next. This is the goal of any author I believe, to make you the readers keep coming back for more. Still I thank you for your opinion.

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The next chapter will be coming out soon however... :pinkiehappy: Seems to keep getting in my way. -Nudges.- As for my fellow Ranma 1/2 writer please send him/her my condolences. I too have cats and know what it's like to lose a loving pet and friend. Hmm... Idea in the making...

1323776I did say her cat. And as of yesterday, she is off the hiatus. Still, I love all Ranma 1/2 crossovers, and I hope to see new chapters for this soon.

Here's the next chapter everypony! Oh right need to add this. All songs mentioned in the fiction are owned by their proper owners. Please listen to them as they are amazing to listen to. :ajsleepy: This was not a easy chapter to write as well it had to do with Pinkie. I had to get her epic hyperactivity down along with the needed answer about the much earlier mentioned punch. -Shivers.- Beware the punch. -Shivers.-

1339085 That punch cant be THAT strong. *Takes sip* O.o :applejackconfused::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::twilightoops:

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:pinkiegasp: I warned you about the Punch! MEDIC!

1357365 *foams at mouth* fhdjdncjismdjziqkdndjcnncsjwkdnrneisiksnd!!!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::applejackconfused::derpytongue2:

I was just wondering when this would update again. Yay, more Ranma 1/2 shenanigans. Now to read.

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Sorry for the long wait. I was sick for some time and had no other choice but to put these off till I was much better. :ajsleepy: Stupid flu season.

Math was still wasn't his strongest subject

I do believe that's one too many was/was nots.

I saw a few other mistakes, but I was too engaged with the story to take notice.

Wow, you're a machine. 2 chapters within 20-30 minutes of each other. Way to go!:pinkiehappy: And I honestly can't say I know how you feel. I was born with an explainable immunity to viruses. Really, the only thing that gets me sick are the big things, like chicken pox. There was this one time, but I don't really know how to describe it. I ate breakfast one morning while on vacation, and for some reason after that, I constantly felt like I was going to throw up. Never did, but all I managed to eat for the entire weekend we were on vacation was a few popsicles. And some 7-UP. Let's just say that when I got home, I laid down for a few hours. After those few hours I went to get a drink of water and blacked out. I was so weak from hunger that I couldn't move from the couch. Oh, and I was born with extremely strong teeth. I never brush, and my teeth are always healthy as can be.

Wow, i rambled. Sorry 'bout that.:twilightsheepish:

Again, I'm sorry for posting another comment. But I felt like I should point this out. Only reason I'm pointing this one out is because it's at the very beginning.

Ranma was already up on his feet in his back yard practicing his more traditional Martial Arts to help stretch out her limbs and steady her breathing as he was participating

Urgh, darn this Google Chrome. It's showing things that are spelled correctly as incorrect. Anyways, you switched between him/her there. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but it's there. Again, if there are more mistakes, i probly won't bring them up. Once I start reading, I don't stop to check every single grammar mistake there might be. Once again, sorry for the constant corrections.:twilightsheepish:

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Ah! Thank you for catching that!

Edit: Corrected

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LOL! I was hopign someone would catch that. Yes it was intentional because he's constantly changing from male to female form. Sorry if that wasn't explained. I'll add that now. However please keep finding the mistakes! :ajsleepy: Sadly I don't really have an editor for this story so help like this be great. Thank you.

1575411If you want, I could be your editor. Depending on the chapter length, I can usually get chapters edited within an hour of receiving them. If you want, I can pm you my email address so you could send me the future chapters.

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Please do and thank you. I'm not sure when the next chapter will be done but still. Thank you. -Bows.-

1575174 No worries sir! As they say, we all get sick at some point in our lives. Nobody blames you for falling ill. Sometimes stuff just happens.
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along with the rest of the quire

I believe you mean choir. Pointing things out as I go along, so expect edits to this comment.

I think she practices the same are as her brother

The same what?:rainbowhuh: Did you mean to say same art? If not, I have no idea what Summer was trying to say.

Okay, I half lied. Only one correction this time around. I did notice a couple other things, but that was just my grammar nazi in me. I'm sure it won't be as obvious to others as it was to me.

manikins

mannequins

grabbed Ranko's soft fast

What?:rainbowhuh: Does not make sense.

Also, kind of wished Ranko could've beaten up Blue. Ah well, you're back with chapters. Hopefully it won't be as long a wait as last time. Keep going strong.

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For once. Bring on the Grammar Nazi!:flutterrage: Also editing.

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Got 'em. Also your right I should have but... we'll leave the beating up for later. :pinkiehappy:

1813943Yes, this pleases me. It also pleases Pinkamena:pinkiecrazy: Looks like Pinkamena will slumber for another month before her next sacrifice.

And jeez, 3 chapters in one night. I just finished the second when I saw the story update. It's because of this that I am not getting any sleep.:applejackconfused:

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Wait? We talking evil Pinkamena or my Pinkamena from Legacy Saga Part 1? If evil... -Has Alucard at the ready with some anti-evil spells.- If not... Pink stop using up the bombs.

Also what is this thing you call sleep?:rainbowhuh:

1813888Sir, ja, Sir. Ich werde sie finden alle und alle Fehler und verwischen sie postwendend.

1814002Neither. Pinkamena as in the goddess of hysteria and maniacal thoughts. She demands a sacrifice every month or so from me.

1814003:rainbowdetermined2: Keep up the good work soldier. :rainbowlaugh: And I see. Alucard! Prep the sacrificial cake! -Alucard looks to find Pinkie with a cake.-
Alucard: What... how did she...
Me: Best not to know.
Alucard: Noted.
:pinkiehappy:

1814028Yes, she is definitely pleased. You have just saved me a month of agony at her hooves.

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