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The Mane 6 and my OC Alicornian are sent to another world where they must survive the horrors of deadly creatures called Chimeras. Can the Mane 6 and their new allies, an Alicorn Prince with the magical ability to change into a bipedal spell-caster or knight, and a honor bound survivor with similar abilities, and a dearly lost friend returned from the dead, survive this new world and find a way off the planet or will they perish before they even begin? Part 1 of a four part series.

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My first My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fan fiction series. Cover image can be found on mylittlebrony.com. Each chapter will be told through the title Character's eyes, please enjoy.

Now Edited by: CanterlotGuardian

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )

:applejackconfused: Okay... six dislikes so far. Comments would be nice so I can try and improve these stories and all up coming ones. Come on everypony, help me out here. :fluttercry: Please?

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It's the alicorn OC, mate. People just hate them on sight. I'm sorry.

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:ajsleepy:Yes well, haters are going to hate, what can you do? Still thank you for commenting.

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I'm sorry Darkakorri but your... comment isn't showing up on my computer so um... mind commenting again?:twilightblush:

To all those who favorited my story! This story is on hiatus till I am able to give it the editing it deserves. Also I'd like to give a big thank you and shout out to Not Worthy for the much needed review for the first chapter. :twilightsmile: This story will be continued AFTER it is corrected so please wait till then. -Bows.-

wall of text... go away! (almost finished editing)

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Me: Why is it I always get these stupid walls? Pinkie are you breaking the fourth wall again?
:pinkiesmile: Maybe.
Me: Maybe? Pinkie everytime you break a fourth wall it gets sent to someones fictions, namely mine. What you have to say for yourself?
:pinkiesad2: Not my fault and you did kill me in the first chapter.
Me: :rainbowderp::derpyderp1::rainbowhuh: Okay you have me there.
:pinkiehappy:
Me: Anyway CanterlotGuardian thanks for the help the fiction really needed it. And Pinkie please stop breaking the fourth wall.:facehoof:
:pinkiecrazy: Can "I" blow it up at least?
Me: :twilightoops: Run!

Usually I dont like alicorn OC's for multiple reasons (if you wish to know them then you could ask) but atleast you added on an alternate universe tag. That helps out a lot to know that your alicorn OC isnt in the canon universe. This is mostly due to the fact that Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Twilight in canon are meant to be the only alicorns, so you arent breaking canon there. Thus I have to say that I dont hate the alicorn OC but I still cant upvote the story. So I think Im just not going to vote and leave it at that.

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