Picking Cherries

Life is like picking cherries, but there was so much more to her than just cherries. Cherry Berry found herself losing herself in the beautiful horizon above her, wondering what it would be like to fly away from the troubles of the world.

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This story was written as part of a gift exchange by reviewers from Nailah’s Review Group, as a gift for The Red Parade! Hope you like it!

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The Red Parade

The Red Parade #1 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 7 · ·

Daww, this was adorable! I love the take on their relationship development and you really made them work well with each other! This was truly a heartwarming story and I loved the backstory you gave her. I loved everything about this: everything moved naturally and the whole story really came together and shines brightly, The idea that Strawberry gave her that signature balloon is also great, and Cherry really is a sign that you can do whatever you want to do. Fantastic story Nailah, thank you for writing this!

Clarke Otterton

Clarke Otterton #2 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 5 · ·

Some lovely, poetic writing here. A very enjoyable story, and I can relate to the sentiment of wanting to fly away into that wild blue yonder...

Sunlight Rays

Sunlight Rays #3 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 3 · ·

“What? Why would he make you pick all those berries by yourself? Shouldn’t he help you?” asked Strawberry, as she reached out a hoof and gently patted the top of my mane.

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Regardless, this was a sweet story, Nailah! I loved the character development and backstory you incorporated into this, and their relationship was sweet and succulent just to the right degree! Wonderful romance story, really loved the emotional and physical connection these two characters show. Good work!

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