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Thanks for Coming In! | Retired

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Comment posted by Love Moth deleted Dec 2nd, 2020

Spike?"

"Yes?"

“I'm cooold.”

"Have you tried the blanket?"

“I'm tireeed.”

"Telling me I'm not warm?"

“Telling you to be warmer.”

This and more was just really cute!
A few errors on his and hers, but I'm sure those were because of auto-correct.
Good stuff all-around!:moustache::raritywink:

B_25 #5 · Dec 2nd, 2020 · · 1 ·

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Would you be able to point them out homie?
~ Yr. Pal, Giant B

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Agh, I have to do work now!:raritydespair:

Give me a few.

It wasn't known if he fell or was thrown onto the but, in treading the waters between consciousness in sleep, one sought to drown if it meant they could sleep. He was like a clock lying across the middle of the mattress. Rarity's hoofsteps clicked back on the ground.

bed

"Exactly—no!" Spike winced in feeling the mare pounce onto the bed, it dipping with a squeak of springs, the series of hooves moving across it. Soon softness draped over her leg, consuming it, as the mare travelled up him. "Please. I can't..."

his

Her mouth was opened, steam escaping it, little clouds from her panting. Her eyes squeezed in bliss as he lowered onto him—finding that fullness that was crazed. Heaving harder and harder the lower she went. Then she stopped. Shivers wiggling into her back. The writhing that was needed in the night.

craved

And, done! That's my good deed for the day.
Still had fun on the re-read. Really liked the causal dialogue and fun with the tired sex. Light and fluffy.

Great job!:moustache:

This was super cute, very nice

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"was thrown onto the but," also, "like a clock"?

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Another missed one

Her forehooves rested on her abs as her back legs gave out

I would imagine is meant to be his abs

B_25 #11 · Dec 3rd, 2020 · · 1 ·

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Thanks for the saves!
~ Yr. Pal, Giant B

Always great to see Sparity in the feature box! Great story, dude!

B_25 #13 · Dec 3rd, 2020 · · 1 ·

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Thanks for the kindness.

Collab when?
~ Yr. Pal, Giant Dad

Great work! More Sparity is always welcomed.

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