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Recently rewritten. Contains occasional adult humor and violence.
On a request from Princess Celestia, Twilight Sparkle and the rest of the mane six explore an abandoned mansion located deep in the woods. While doing so, they unwittingly stumble across an enchanted mirror that scrambles their DNA and pops out three brand new bouncing baby ponies. Hilarity and drama ensue as the mane six must cope with being suddenly thrust into motherhood, as well as protect their new foals from a dark god that wishes to use them for his own sinister gain.


The three foals. by Freefraq on Deviantart.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3030 )

I have no idea what's going on but I wanna find out, so I'll be watching this one. Here, have an up-vote:pinkiehappy:

Woah... this is good. I'm watching! Nice inclusion of Norse mythology! it's a nice twist from the usual old Somepony gets pregnant or discord wrecks havoc sort of Mane 6 get a baby story.

Basically this idea is pretty original and written well. Keep it up!

Please let one baby be of AJ's and RD's DNA *fingers crossed*

"She loved dreaming so much she even once tried to have a dream within a dream within a dream, but decided that was a bit too silly"

Great story, can't wait to see where this goes.

Woah.... this story is really good! :raritystarry:

It gets five mustaches from me :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Can't wait for the rest :twilightsmile:

Before reading:
Rainbow Dash + Twilight = me
Fluttershy + Applejack = Apple Cloud
Pinkie Pie + Rarity = ?
Edit: After reading, I discovered I was right. For RD and TS. SHENANIGAN TIME!

The next chapter... I must have it....seriously, great story!

A favourite from me.

REactions from the 6 once genetics are figgured out:




This is awesome.

Take a free mustache Spike.

Awesome chapter must have more. And about the idea of romance later please no this has a lot of potential and i would hate to see it devolve into a ship fest. But that is just my opinion and its yours story but again LOVE it so far:pinkiesmile:

Well this is.........different.

Totally mind-buckingly different.

I am now intrigued. Let us see where this is going to take us in chapter 2.

An interesting premise, I'll keep my eyes on this one.

it's a great start, I'm looking forward to seeing were this goes

ALLLL ABOARD, EVERYPONY! It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Please, don't let me distract you; carry on.

Interesting. Good read and can't wait to see how this goes. Was thinking of how those foals were paired up as well. Was thinking:

:ajsmug:+:rainbowderp:= filly
:yay:+:duck:= colt
and lastly :facehoof:+:pinkiehappy:= ?

:twilightangry2: Why am I paired up with Pinkie?
me: For now go with it Twilight, it's just a guess.
:facehoof: Why me?
me: Well you could be paired up with someone else. Who knows Twilight, it is up to the author and personaly I see you more with :rainbowhuh: than :pinkiesad2:. Oh well, author, surprise me.

“Yes ma'am. Sorry ma'am, please don't do the chicken thing again ma'am!” :rainbowlaugh:

Was this at all G1-inspired?

From the description of the foals.

Pure Pink Pegasus :fluttershyouch: + :pinkiehappy:

White Unicorn with Blond Hair :applejackunsure: + :raritywink:

Purple Alicorn with Rainbow Hair :rainbowderp: + :twilightoops:

What could "Evil Forces" want with the foals?

I assume that as soon as this is reported to Celestia the Life Mirror itself will be locked down with tighter security than the Elements of Harmony anyone who desires its secrets might decide that it would be easier to reverse engineer the magics from the foals themselves rather than attempt a break in that difficult.

Or as hinted by the Twi-Dash spawn the foals aren't normal ponies and may possess unusually potent or unique abilities. All the mothers are exceptional specimens after all. Twilight, Rainbow and AJ are absolute paragons of Unicorns, Pegasi and Earth Ponies respectively. Fluttershy and Pinkie have non-standard magic for their types. Rarity... I've got nothin :raritycry:

And of course the mother's connection to the Elements of Harmony might have unusual affects as well.

This has potential for incredibly untapped hilarity. :raritystarry:

Will the new mommies breast-feed by the way?

I'm curious about the combination of :fluttershyouch: + :pinkiehappy: personality wise, :raritywink:+ :ajsmug: attitude wise, and :rainbowwild: + :twilightsmile: power wise.

Bloody hell... This is awesome! Reads like an episode!

interesting....but alas i have halo to play...hmmm certainly read after work tomorrow

Just saw this in the box... sounds hilarious.

For a first ever fanfic, this is quite well written and enjoyable.

Looking forward to more.

I may be wrong about the foal genetics. But from description :pinkiegasp:x:yay: :raritydespair:x:ajsleepy: and :twilightblush:x:rainbowhuh:

is that right?

Anyway im watching this, i can tell it'll be good

This actually sounds really good and its nice fast start. Can't wait for more Babies have tons of potential; they literally potential....which poop.....and smell bad.......and cry a lot.

*sigh* Not sure if this will live up to it's comedic potential or not. The key stage for that is next chapter. Rainbow Sparkle, Flutterpie, and... I got nothing!:twilightangry2: What the hell would you even call the unicorn offspring of Applejack and Rarity?!:rainbowhuh: I suppose if this 'verse has Rarity's last name as Belle it could be Applebelle/Apple Belle... but if no Rarity Belle then I got nothing!:facehoof:

WES MUST HAZ A :pinkiehappy: + :facehoof: WE MUST. BRillient idea and from how you make it sound makes me wanna jump in withotu a 2nd thought on the matter wish you nonthign but the best! :twilightsmile:

1195359>>1194441 I agree with these comments.

Awesome story so far, though right off the bat I had a problem with the synopsis. "Twilight Sparkle and her five best friends..." is inaccurate. It would lead one to assume that whichever Element has the weakest personal connection with Twilight should have been absent. So one would have been confused as to why there were six ponies instead of five ponies and one dragon. "...you are my number-one assistant and friend, and you always will be." At least reading the fanfic clarified that his existence as a character was acknowledged. Some jerky, careless authors like to just ignore him so they can focus on ponies. Looking forward to seeing this develop!


Rarity does seem the most normal of the Mane 6 but then again unlike most unicorns she does seem able to do magic without thinking about it. Remember her cutie mark story?

Somehow I don't think Sleipnir was evil in this continuity... more like a mad scientist prankster who only did it for the lols.

:facehoof: i wish i had rid the story before commeting... anyhoo...BRILLIANCE HAS STRUCK THIS DAY ALL FEAR THIS STORY AND ITS GREATNESS! :twilightblush: I wish you the best of luck!

aww man(stallion?) this just looks awesome.

Actually its
1. Rarity and Applejack
2. Pinkie and Fluttershy
3. Twilight and Rainbow Dash
Read the descriptions of the babies, and you'll see the qualities of they gained from the two DNA givers.

The Chocobo has spoken! So mote it be!

1196277 I think you're 'safe' for no shipping, since there's no romance tag, 'I am that is'. Personally, I LIKE good shipping, but the key word is 'good', and, honestly, I find that hard to do so w/o M/F casting... XD

1196347 The Frocobo has indeed spoken... AND FROCOBO SAYS YES! (If you dun know the Frocobo, then I feel sorry for you! XD)

Welcome to parenthood. Population you. :applejackconfused::raritydespair::pinkiegasp::fluttershyouch::rainbowhuh::facehoof:

1194378 Baby 1: white unicorn with blond mane= Rarity and AJ. Baby 2: pure pink pegasus= Fluttershy and pinkie. Baby 3: violet pegacorn/alicorn with rainbow mane= Twilight and RD

Delightful! Pinkie's concept of a 'naughty' dream alone is worth the thumbs-up. :pinkiesmile:

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