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Vis-a-Viscera


Now witness the power of this filly armed and operational battlestation.

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A breakdown in relations between the recently recolored Hope Hollow and Ponyville has Equestria's favorite unicorn trio trekking out to the Hollow to get to the bottom of the matter. Along the way, they'll be drawn into the center of a disappearance mystery, the revelation of a long-lost member of a Great and Powerful family, and a showdown with a villain who's more than meets the camera's eye.


My entry for HapHazred's Change Of Pace contest. Thanks to Shaslan for co-writing, and him, SweetBanana and TCC56 for pre-reading!

SPOILER: Hi-ho, hi-ho, thru black-and-white we go...

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 6 )

Is this a nod to that one Jimmy Neutron episode?

This is a good story! I love it... what do I like about it?... the last chapter with the pool scene.

RDT

I thought that throwing Reeltime into the pool would have created another negative, not just made him disappear.

Anyways, nice story! Had the vibe of an MLP episode, short and sweet.

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Thank you both kindly for your wonderful words. I liked that final scene too.

Am I seeing two characters of Ian Hanlin here? If I observed, I would be like "Two Ian Hanlins? I'm in heaven!" well I would say that because the voice actor of both Sunburst and Mayor Sunny Skies is my celebrity crush😍

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