Thorax still remembered his nymph years. They were lonely, and even life threatening at times. If it wasn’t for Pharynx, he’d probably be dead long ago.
He just wished Pharynx didn’t have to go such extreme lengths to protect him.
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Yeeeeah might wanna change that there.
Also, changelings can regrow amputated limbs? Interesting.
Overall, so far so good. 👍🏻
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Crap, my autocorrect kept doing that while I was typing, I swear I caught all of them but I guess not
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Understandable.
This story is pretty great :)
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Does your word program think "broodmate" is not a word? When I get fed up enough with auto-correct I just add the word to the program's dictionary. Most programs let you right-click the word and add it right there.
Aww, that was a sweet ending, Pharynx is such a good brother. Looking forward to seeing more of this!
Instructor Halter huh? I‘m guessing that they heard about what Instructor Tegmen did to Thorax.
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If I remember correctly, Tegmen was said to have been disciplined (or dealt with otherwise) in the first chapter
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Serves him right.
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Exactly. Now if only something along those lines would happen to Halter...
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We’ll see
This came up under Updated, but I don't see any new chapters. Is something wrong?
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Oh no, I just accidentally published an unfinished chapter. It’s back to being unpublished now, but it almost gave me a heart attack
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Okay then, I'm eagerly awaiting the finished chapter
And how did I not see this had been updated?! Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to another!
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Thanks!
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No problem!
I absolutely do not miss the 'hitting yourself' thing. It gets old really quickly, it doesn't strike me as something Pharynx would do even in his nymphhood, and the only reason I can think of why it was in the episode is to give Pharynx an idea how to deal with the maulwurf.
Aww, I kind of like the hitting yourself game, it would be like a normal "brotherly" thing for them to do. But you're right, it doesn't really fit this particular scenario. I really liked this chapter, can't wait to see the next!
Nice to see Thorax finally snap. That Halter bitch deserved it.
Yes! Thorax finally stood up against Halter, that guy deserved it! But is Pharynx okay?! He can't be gone, not after he was finally warming up to showing emotion towards Thorax...
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Okay...
Also added to my read list!
Aww! That was a wonderful ending, I love the story!
Oh dang poor thorax that instructure almost kill him I guess it's very dangerous there poor kid being treated so badly there but I'm glad pharynx is there with him I mean he could be mean but at least he protects him in his own way
A nice short little story. Definitely a keeper. Very enjoyable read, look forward to see what else changeling related you may come up with.
Wait... that’s the end? Already?!
It was a great story overall, though I'm sad it's over. I love the interactions in-between the brothers and how thorax stood up for himself and pharynx when it truly mattered.
Well then that was something so with thorax being three-legged it's going to be a very long day for this poor Changeling of course this instruction is very brutal as well letting the other little ones to almost kill each other and almost thorax almost got himself killed but thanks to his big brother he stopped the other one but of course a lot of the changelings are very disappointed at thorax but the ending was pretty cute at least pharynx can be very playful to his brother even though he can be rough 😊
You know despite pharynx training can be a little hard especially for thorax but at least it helps him so thats cool at least right
So apparently those two wanted to get out of that place because the other small changelings are going crazy but it looks like they went to the nursing room where the healer is keep an eye on the other little ones and I did like how you use the flashback of the episode To Change a Changeling which I did like that episode but you use a different dialogue instead of the why you hitting yourself no don't get me wrong I actually thought of laugh about that because it kind of reminds me how my brothers are like that even though I hate it so much so I can relate to thorax but again I do like how much he protect his brother so that's cool of him
Holy mackerel that instructor was really crazy so if you fail his class he will kill you dang that is something I really don't like to fail but pharynx would never let that happen so he fought with the instructor but unfortunately he got hurt in the process but it took a lot thorax seen all this and he became angry and finally finding his true strength and defeating the older changeling but right now he's worried about pharynx he's hurt 😥
Wow this was a pretty good story to see how thorax and pharynx in their younger years how they been through and this was a very nice ending to see Brothers helping each other no matter how bad it is I like that good job on the story
I don't surprise Halter suffered an unfortunate 'accident' later?
i scaned in medbay
lol
well thats sus
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i actually imagined this with you talking EXTREMELY fast
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XD
Funny thing was that I wrote this before I knew what Among us was
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yeah most of my comments are about among us (thats why i only read changeling stories) when i see among us or other among us words i immediately comment (i said among us 4 times)
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you should put a . somewhere.
I would love to see a sequel of this. It was a great story!
Instant like for the best siblings in fim and the fandom
Good start, but the grammar flubs are prevalent enough to distract me from enjoying the story. A bit of a fixer-upper, as the trolls would say.
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Dude, I’ve seen your comments on another story too, just wanted to tell you, we don’t need an assessment of every chapter. We’re not blind
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Somehow I've been getting that a lot and that's probably one of my bad reputation I've been getting that's why I put like a spoiler line which I kind of forgot to do which a lot of people gets upset with me and I understand why but that's just my thing okay and I'm sorry for anybody who gets bothered about it
This was pretty good.
Interesting start…
Foreshadowing his future.
Heartwarming story…