Hunger Pains

Thorax was a weakness, always have been.

Pharynx didn’t mind it.

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Melody Song

Melody Song #1 · Jul 5th, 2021 · 3 · ·

Awwwww

So adorableeeeeee! Pharynx is such a sweet little nymph!

BezierBallad

BezierBallad #2 · Jul 5th, 2021 · 2 · ·

Pretty chilling, especially without dialogue.

I’d say you pretty much nailed it.

Daemon Wolf 22

Daemon Wolf 22 #3 · Jul 5th, 2021 · 1 · ·

PROTECC.

theOwtcast

theOwtcast #4 · Jul 5th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Awwwwwwwwwww

Martydi

Martydi #5 · Jul 5th, 2021 · 4 · ·

I simultaneously want to cry because of Thorax's suffering, and smile because of Pharynx. Well done.

Changeling404

Changeling404 #6 · Jul 6th, 2021 · · ·

Thorax "was" a weakness? Typo on purpose? Or?...
I'll read when i wake up...
Zzzzz...

CitreneSkys

CitreneSkys #7 · Jul 6th, 2021 · · ·

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I don’t think that’s a typo…?

Not according to Grammarly that is—

Shrinky Frod

Shrinky Frod #8 · Jul 6th, 2021 · 2 · ·

A few spots where the tenses were a bit off, but an editor would help with that.

Excellent story, and something I've been thinking about Pharynx for a while. Thorax might get the credit, but if it weren't for Pharynx, none of that would have been possible. Both because Thorax wouldn't be alive to have done it, probably, and because he never would have known that there *was* another way to survive than stealing love.

Changeling404

Changeling404 #9 · Jul 6th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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Really? I think it should be:
"Thorax was allways a weak-Ling"...
Heh... HAHAHAHAHAHA... ahem...
Sorry.

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #10 · Jul 10th, 2021 · · ·

Awww this was a pretty sweet story of two brothers care for each other and it's really sweet to see pharynx will always protect his brother from anybody I really like that keep up the good work with this story

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