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May contain high concentrations of Thorax and/or Pharynx. You've been warned.

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This story is a sequel to Walk Where There Is No Path


Pharynx has always been a capable and fearsome fighter, one of the best in the hive. It came as no surprise to anyone that he should become First Commander after the previous one’s death in battle. He has succeeded in every task and every mission given to him, except for one: to turn his soft-hearted brother into a warrior too. Correcting that one blemish in an otherwise spotless career would undoubtedly prove his devotion to the hive and its Queen. But upon Thorax’s sudden departure, having been given the unenviable task of damage control, Pharynx is left questioning his lifelong conviction and must decide where his loyalties lie.


I know it says above that this is a sequel to Walk Where There Is No Path, but it’s actually more of a midquel to that and Winds of Change, and familiarity with the said stories isn’t a requirement to understand what’s going on. I recommend that you read them anyway if you haven’t already, but you don’t have to do it before reading this.

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 140 )

I admit, I had a double take when I saw the title. You probably already know why :rainbowlaugh:

(Cause... Venom :twilightsheepish:)

Just wait until Pharynx’s reaction when Thorax leaves though. :ajsleepy:

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Yeah, I noticed it too :twilightsheepish: and sorry for the delay in answering. I wanted to think of something witty to say but I seem to have a brain freeze :fluttershysad:

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Understandable. I’m hyped for the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

Pharynx is already my favorit. Strong, dependable, skilled, well known and of sound mind with a good heart.

Congratulations your sequel reached ten likes. :twilightsmile: But its fairly new so it takes time to get read and liked. :raritywink:

O Tarterus is Thorax in trouble... Good to know his near future fate... Still i wonder how many Changeling will have decived and killed to save Thorax :rainbowderp:
Chrysalis will be absolutly livid by the end of this. Good we know he keeps his head and leading position by the end of it. As well there are no eggs to smash... When faced with brother OR children(grubs/nymphs) i doubt Thorax would be that lucky...

This story still reminds me of those parody song lyrics you wrote. (Cuz they’re still really good!)

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Thanks! I still kinda hope someone will give life to that even though it's been a while and there's probably not much to hope for :fluttershysad: oh well, not the first disappointment I've ever had. At least people still read my stories :pinkiesad2:

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I know how you feel. I’ve been wanting to make MTCG an audio drama, even though I know it’s not possible at the moment, since I have none of the needed equipment for it.

Which is why I made it a fanfic.

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And you're doing great! :pinkiehappy: Keep it up!

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Thanks. I bet you read the recent few chapters. Any thoughts?

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I was so relieved when Thorax woke up (I was afraid he was going to die), and him waking up to the sight of Pharynx crying made it even better (did you get the idea from one of my stories?).
The gang's reaction to getting transformed was priceless :rainbowlaugh: looking forward to see how they'll survive whatever Pharynx has in store for them :pinkiehappy: (IF they survive, that is)
If you're asking if I'd change anything, no, I like it the way it is.

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Thanks. Idk how it made it “better, though. Cuz I was afraid it made Pharynx OOC in some way :twilightsheepish:

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It shows that he has a range of emotions wider than 'grumpy' and 'furious' and that he isn't afraid of showing that he cares for his brother in more ways than beating up whoever/whatever tries to harm him. I don't see it as being OOC, just that he prefers to keep that part of himself hidden. (Does that make any sense?) It also gives him a moment of being kinda cute and I like cute things :twilightsheepish:

Does this story have any of the OCs from Meet the Change Gang in it?

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I didn't mean it in a sexual way if that's what you're thinking! I'm not into guys :facehoof:

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No (the last few comments here were somewhat off-topic)

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Of course I know that. I even didn’t mean it like that. :rainbowlaugh:
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Why? Have you read it?

That went better than expected. Shows how important he is... Possibel enougth to be considered a future consort if not for his brothers missdeeds...
Im quite curiouse how this continues :ajsmug:

Great chapter! :ajsmug: Truly a brother one can only wish for in terms of dedication :rainbowdetermined2:

Bearly a few minutes out and i desire a new update :pinkiehappy: Amazing work :twilightsmile:

Looking good. Chrysalis dont seem to suspect him to protect Thorax anymore. Of course there is the bare minimum of observations on him but he capable and loyal to boot ( normaly ).

Im curiouse how many deceptions and kills he will have in the very end massed up to save his brother.

Looking good so far. We will see what happens next...

O boy! I totaly missed this update :pinkiegasp:

Great chapter. So this are the first deaths that Chrysalis will be counting on Thorax head.

I wonder how many Pharanx will get on his in the end :rainbowderp:

Great world building.

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She doesn't know that Thorax had anything to do with it. They're simply covering all bases just in case.

Also, want to place bets on how many deaths Pharynx will cause? :trixieshiftright: I Pinkie promise not to deviate from my plans to prove you wrong :pinkiehappy:

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I come back to it sunday if i have time to re-read Thorax part :raritywink:

Holy Royal Jelly! What a chapter! Im in awe!

Oh what a risky tightrope you walk Pharynx, but good on you for trying.

Wow. I can't wait to keep reading this.

I kinda didn't but glad for the confirmation.

There can never be something as strong as love. What else let you give up everything you have and value? Pharanx is very heroic. As is custom for true heros. Never ever will anyone know about it. The world keep turning and the Changelings can still live on thanks to actions like this. Giving himself for the sake of others.

And the Acrobatics check was a success...for now.

Psycho probably wannt him rested for the Crystal Empire covered invasion. Or maybe he really see Pharanx overworked/not fit for the task.

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He thinks he can do a better job in hunting down Thorax and is hoping to take Pharynx's place in leading the hunt if he can convince Chrysalis that Pharynx is too incompetent/disloyal/whatever other excuse he can find. And they haven't started planning the Crystal Empire invasion yet.

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Good to know. Thank for clearing that point up.

I can only imagine Pharynx’s reaction to seeing characters like Braeburn and Zecora treating his brother the way they did. (Read “Walk Where There Is No Path” for context.)

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:rainbowderp: We should avoid telling him about those two, or about Zecora at least, I like her too much :twilightoops: (I have no problem with him finding out about Flim and Flam, though :rainbowlaugh:)

And it's "Walk Where There Is No Path, not when. Probably just a typo on your end, so no hard feelings

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I think it might be too late to keep the secret, I’m afraid.


I just fixed it. Sorry about that. :facehoof:

Great chapter that fills some blanks of Thorax perspective and makes the overall view of things better. One reason why the same story can be told repeating itself but staying new and exciting by changing the view point on a story and/or character.

I really do like how you're showing that Blood really is thicker than venom/water.

I'm still hoping Pharynx willingly gave away he was replacing someone in the Crystal Empire to Thorax while pretending he wasn't doing so. It's very very clear by this point that while Pharynx would never willingly admit it, he really really cares for his little brother Thorax.

Not unexpected. Wonder how the Changeling perspective is on the second overtrow attempt.

Love the chapter. If i didnt know what happend mystery would get me hyped for getting to know the plans. Still eager for the next chapter :yay:

Great work :rainbowdetermined2:

The trilogy is almost linked now, and Pharynx's character is gut wrenching to see unfold. I hope you are well during this outbreak.

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I am, at least I think so. Things haven't gotten out of control in my country, and I tested negative a couple of weeks ago, but we have a shortage of PPE so I've had no choice but to wear the same mask for over a week, and one or two of those days were 24-hour shifts (thankfully we didn't have many patients). I'm feeling fine for now, and let's hope it stays that way :applejackunsure:

Yep the trilogy is almost linked and I really do want to know if Pharynx purposely let Thorax know he was there in the Crystal Empire.

Thankfully for Pharynx, Thorax escaped.

Damn... What a Chaos. Very lovely twists and turns.

Seriously tho, hi.

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Uh, hi? :applejackunsure: Call me stupid, but I'm not sure I understand what you meant by that last comment on The Bug in the Cave

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