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ScarFox9700


I'm just your average Brony. I love trains, I love history, I love writing stories, and I really, really love wolves! But most of all, I love writing my stories here for your enjoyment!

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I don't commonly read incest-type stories but this immediately caught my attention and i must say...

I'm really enjoying this story so far :trixieshiftright:

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Hello DevyChicken,

And I'm glad that you're enjoying this story so far. I've never written an incest-type story before, but I wanted "Cabin" to be special. It isn't just about the sex, but it's also about real family bonding, a lot of wholesome moments, and at the same time, the underlying tone of the story is that all actions have consequences. Once you make your choices, you have to live with them, and whatever comes after. It's certainly a unique blend, and I hope that this story does well

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Hello Starlight Nova,

And good catch on that. I fixed it now

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

nice chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

What is with the time stamps on this story? How long have you been sitting there circling the publish button?!

I don't want sound mean...but you need to work on your introductions better. That was way too chunky. And exposition.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

nice chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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Hello shining paladin,

And I'm glad that you liked the story. It might be a while until the sequel though, as I have a lot on my plate right now

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Hello Kaisar,

And I've been sitting on this one for a while. I started writing this story more than a year ago, as my story "Texas: A Time to Fight!" was getting bogged down with writer's block, but then it got bogged down too, and eventually I finished it, but I then asked my readers if they wanted Chapter 5 of "Texas" first, or this story, and they chose "Texas", so I had to sit on this story for another number of months until I finally finished Chapter 5, and then it took me another week or so to edit this story, and get it ready. So yeah, that's why there was such a huge gap between when this story was originally written, and when I published it

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Hello shining paladin,

And thanks!:twilightsmile:

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Hello BronyofMeddlers,

And this tends to be a trademark of all of my stories. A lot of them, even the ones that tend to be action-packed, or full of sex, have a long, slow burn leading up to the action. All of my MC's have a name, and a backstory, and I usually spend at least part of Chapter 1, or the Prologue, introducing them, and telling their backstory. With this story, I wanted Chapter 1 to be a nice, quiet chapter that introduced Arctic as a kid, talked about his past, and began to set up his new life as a Human-Bat-Pony in Deepwood with his new family, as well as him settling into his new life. This story style isn't for everyone, but that's how my stories tend to be

Jesus my whole whoa I feel so like I can't describe it but I feel so nice the story is good I like it but still I'm just so much emotions though they're hitting me just now just reading this thank you for making this story and I'm going to be more of this and I hope someday I might make my own story I hope you make more of this or whatever you do :-)

Again I want to I don't know what to do no more the story is starting to get more interesting geez man this story is so good I get so I just can't thank you for making this story I I am I'm going to go read the rest I'm going to leave every comment and each episode and explain how much it's this is so good thank you for making this :-)

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Hello Alxsofthenight,

And I'm glad that you're liking this story so far. This is my first foray into the world of incest, and so far, it's been a mixed bag. As for writing more, as of now, there is a sequel being planned for this story, however, it's entirely contingent on this story succeeding. If it fails, then the sequel may/will never come, as obviously people didn't/don't want it. So if you want more, cross your fingers, and pray that this story succeeds

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Hello Alxsofthenight,

And you're welcome:twilightsmile: I'm glad that you're enjoying your read so far

Ok that was I'm okay I'm not freaking out and I'm totally not trying to figure out how this even works oh well thanks for making this I'll keep on doing the rest,:-)

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Hello Alxsofthenight,

And I'm glad that you're still enjoying the story

Then I'm so I can't explain it but it's just so good like I want to one day I might look back at this and say man the story was great and I still love it to stay day thank you for making this story like I said in my other post I'm going to be reading a and leaving this comments I hope you make more of this feels so good and thank you again ,:-)

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Hello Alxsofthenight,

And once again, I'm glad that you're enjoying this story so much. It makes me happy to see you so happy. As for more, I said that a sequel is being planned, but it being written hinges on this story's success

Nooooooo who is getting so good though maybe you never played the sequel maybe not I have to go check if I hopefully it's the ladder the story was so good I loved how you just give the character some more character development like out of this world thank you for making this up probably get to see it sequel or maybe not but that's fate I suppose :-)

a painting of a lighthouse you say?.... now here have i seen such a building? it wouldn't happen to be Sunny Starscouts lighthouse, would it?

When I think of that serum you mentioned, I'd guess that it works similarly to the Polyjuice Potion from Harry Potter as it would likely require a sample from the tribe that the human would partially transform into. otherwise the orphanage would need several variants for each tribe, it would be easier to just have a base serum an then add a sample (hair or blood) to the serum to trigger the tribal traits during the change.

Awesome chapter dude keep up the good work
Have a like👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽

I'm tempted to check this story out...

Even if the description is a giant red flag. It's way too long. It's clunky and clearly unpolished.

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Hello QuakeSanchez,

And I would highly advise checking this story out. As after all, you know what they say, don’t judge a book by its cover

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Hello Alxsofthenight,

And like I said before, I’ll try to write the sequel to this story, though if I do, it’ll be a while before I can get to it, due to my job, and busy home life

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Hello MikiStenbeck,

And actually, this isn’t a reference to G5. Why? Because I wrote this chapter over a year ago, long before the new movie even came out. When I mentioned the lighthouse painting, I was thinking of a painting I saw irl, though unfortunately, I can’t remember where I saw it

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Hello Max Hunter,

I’m glad that you enjoyed the story. And thanks for the like!:twilightsmile:

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Hello Ebonis,

And I can certainly see the parallels here. However, this serum is a reference to another story of mine, “Courting Danger”, where the MC also became a Human-Bat-Pony upon his arrival in Equestria thanks to a special serum

Well.... Shit just hit the fan

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Hello Max Hunter,

And you're right. Chapter 3 Parts 1-2 is where things get too real for Arctic

Its four o'clock in the morning, so this is going to be short. Yet, I couldn't not write anything, because this is a well written and fun story.

I liked it and would be interested in seeing more about humans and ponies in this unique world you created. It doesn't have to be the same characters, but i definitely want too see this world again

Well done
The Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan

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Hello rikithemonk,

And I'm glad that you enjoyed this story, as well as the universe I created around it. And if you want to see more, then that may happen. I have a sequel to this story on the drawing board, and this story will be less about sex, and more about world-building, and other cool things I don't want to spoil yet. I don't yet know when this story will be written, but it'll happen someday in the not too distant future

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It ok I just feel like a story and thank you for making this :-)

i can say this is a grate story with all kind's of fun times.

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Hello harts fire,

And I’m glad that you enjoyed the story. It was a really fun one to write

I love the story are you going to finish this story thank you for sharing it

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Hello Lord Panther,

And I'm glad that you liked this story. And I'm not sure yet when I'll start working on the sequel to this story, but it will happen someday soon

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