On a dangerous mission deep inside enemy territory, you are betrayed by your teammate, your life and mission put in jeopardy. Now it's just two of you against a whole base filled with enemy troops.
Good thing you have a mountainous mare like Tempest Shadow on your side.
An entry in LewdChapter's Muscle Mania Contest.
"I gotta give props to the dude who had the balls to enter a T-rated fic into a fetish smut contest." -LewdChapter
Contains: One buff Amazonian Tempest Shadow, one wimpy weenie, aka You, shameless second-person anthro OC x canon shipping, generic sci-fi action, being safely held in the arms of a muscular goddess, cool explosions and stuff.
Not a Star Wars crossover, though the reader will be forgiven for thinking otherwise.
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That cover art. Unf
A title like that would fit right in with the Austraeoh saga.
Solid as heck, fun relationship building and actually felt like a story rather than a shipping excuse! Would love to see this continued at some point.
This one... I liked this one a lot.
I'll be honest, when I first saw this story entered into the contest, I kinda wasn't expecting much. I mean, another Tempest fic? Not that I'm complaining, but you do start to get the sense that people aren't being as creative as they could be.
That's not the case here. Quite the opposite, actually. You took a great many risks in this story, what with it being a 2nd-person sci-fi OC romance with no sex, and I gotta give you props for that. And the fact that you managed to make me not care that this is only a T rated story says to me that you made the right call. Your use of Tempest's size was fun, and I think the idea of a muscle fic where the main character is grossed out by muscles is very interesting.
I wish this didn't feel quite so overtly "Star Wars", and had more of its own identity. That would probably have made it perfect for me (well, that and some sloppy ab worship, but I won't be greedy).
This is, excuse me, a damn fine story.
Thank you for your participation in Muscle Mania 2020! We here on the judge's council wish you the best of luck!
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Yarr, thank ye, me hearty! Apologies fer the Star Warsin', sci-fi 'n pirates just don't mix!
Hello, Inspector Con here to do the regular contest entry review. Hope ya don't mind me coming at ya so late.
I'm gonna be honest, I never got into Star Wars. I just didn't feel like it was my kind of thing. But the way you told this story gave me a nice sci-fi feel I enjoyed from start to finish. I do feel like you leaned a bit on the Star Wars aesthetic for world building, but it didn't take away from my enjoyment of the story.
A few things stood out to me about the story itself. It was very interesting, but the romance felt a little shallow. There's not much you can do in under 10k to make a romance flow naturally, and I felt like you did a decent job, but I'd be lying if I said it didn't feel a little strange. Overall, good job, friend-o.
Good luck in the contest! Or, what I should say is... yaaar?
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Yarrrr!
Thank ye kindly, matey!