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"Oh no."

Sunset wasn't into nature documentaries.

She didn't stop the shows because things were getting too icky.

She paused them right before the good parts.

Well...she did use to be a Unicorn:twilightsheepish:.

Fluttershy hiccuped but righted herself. "A-and I'm sorry I looked at your, um..." She whispered the word. "Boobaloos."

Really Fluttershy:rainbowlaugh:?!

Sunset rolled her eyes. "Yeah, I should definitely apologize for that, too. Kinda forget about common human decency standards in my own home, y'know?" She chuckled.

I'd be surprised if you didn't:ajsmug:.

"Fluttershy, they're nature documentaries. There's nothing fantastic about them!"

I amazed that Fluttershy did not take offense to that:rainbowderp:!

More to break the silence than because she had anything to say, Fluttershy mumbled, "Uh--"

"I have a giant horsecock," Sunset blurted. "Like, between my legs. Right now."

Fluttershy's face instantaneously completed its transition to a bright cherry red.

"Oh my god, gimme."

OH FAUST:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:!!!

We must have a sequel with the naughty fun between these two!

I agree with NagaShark. Please author, can I have some moar?

"I have a giant horsecock," Sunset blurted. "Like, between my legs. Right now."

Fluttershy's face instantaneously completed its transition to a bright cherry red.

"Oh my god, gimme."

THE END

MY SIDES!!!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Was not expecting that ending... :rainbowlaugh:

kits #7 · Jan 30th, 2019 · · ·

As I demanded before: chptr 2 whn?

Majin Syeekoh
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PROCURE THE CONTINUATION OF THIS WORK OF FICTION

Wait... what?

Agreed...sequel?

This was rather absurd and weird and implausible and stuff, up until that last line of dialogue, which, like, totally sold me on these people being realistic characters reacting to things in a normally human-ish sort of way.

Well looks like Sunset is gonna take the phrase “rock her world” to whoooole new level!! :yay::rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy:

The process is simple: we put a dwarf in a room filled with traps.

um...I was going to quote a thing from this, but then I tabbed out to watch a video and copied this. So I guess it's yours now.

Also, stop writing a far better version of my stories.

I know the towel has to be present for the end to make sense, but I can’t think of a good reason for Sunset using it.

Oh-! ...So close!

The ending just ruined it for me, but I get the feeling I’m in the minority on that one. Still... sorry.

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... She just got out of a shower. Do you seriously get out of your show and drag your wet carcass all over your carpet when the towel you drape around yourself can soak up anything spilling down from a mass of hair like hers? That'll take ages to dry.

Sometimes, she just pretended Sunset was a horse furry. Fursuits were adorable.

But what is up with the neon day-glo dicks?

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What a twist!

Best. Ending. Ever.

I like the little details here, like Sunset's uncomfortable couch, and massive phallus.

Also Fluttershy bringing up horse body standards is adorable, and so very her :pinkiehappy:

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I’m referring to how it’s around her waist at first. Wrapping her hair makes sense but I towel dry in the shower as soon as the water is off.

Brilliant work, dude.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Oh lawdy I lol'd.:yay:

I grinned so hard as I read this!:rainbowlaugh:

It proceeded as I expected, up until the end... and... well... Sunset has a giant horse cock. No other words need to be said, really.

Oh lawd, my sides have ascended to a new plain of existence. Top kek, my dear.

Well that's a twist I didn't expect XD

Well that went to unexpected places at the end. :rainbowderp:

Welp...maximum troll achieved.

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Ah you beat me to it:trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

Boobaloos is Scootaloo's second cousin

....Does this mean that Sunset was originally male before being banished to this side of the mirror?

"A-and I'm sorry I looked at your, um..." She whispered the word. "Boobaloos."

It is late at night and I am giggling madly at this :rainbowlaugh:

Well, this was a fadoodlingly good read. I schnorgled at the end.

...I know what I said. :pinkiecrazy:

Okay, I'll admit I didn't see the end coming. In a way the whole thing, since I thought it might be a fakeout where Flutters did suspect Sunset would be into horses.

Anyway, good stuff. Fluttershy's adorable, and Sunset's delightfully nonchalant about everything. They play off each other well.

I guess also, since it was kind of brought up by Fluttershy herself... gotta wonder if the horsecock is from Equestria, an artifact of the portal, or something else (the alicorn ascension in "My Past is not Today"?).

Now that was an unexpected ending but all the same I was intrigued and found it funny.

And here I thought Flutters was just going to find out Sunset was gay...


I really should have seen that coming.

...

Take my like, you filthy degenerate, and several of my finest lulz.

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I don't think it was implied as being futa. I think Sunset was talking about some toy she had between her legs. Though I could be wrong...

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"Sunset snorted and laughed. "No, Fluttershy, I definitely don't compare myself to the mares.""
Futa is definitely implied

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Yarr, Rainbow Dash was right!

Okay, the ending made me giggle.

Well. That went places.

But even still, Fluttershy didn't get what going through the mirror portal did. She wasn't sure she ever would.

Then one day Pinkie shoved her through it, and she was enlightened. Also sore.
From hitting the floor of pony Twilight's castle with her muzzle. What did you think I meant? :duck:

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I want to find a way to connect that quote to the story, but everything I think of seems more fitting for BCU!Rainbow Dash than Sunset.

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