Love Spreads

by Closer-To-The-Sun

Ch. 3 Just Like Honey

Chapter 3: Just Like Honey

In the now vacant cottage, Spike looked at Fluttershy. The yellow pegasus already had one tear roll down her cheek. Her body was still trembling from Spike's shouting. It seemed as if she had something to say, but she was so shaken from the incident that even if she had the words, she would more than likely have more tears fall.

The dragon looked away from the mare, immediately regretting his action. With his scales on end, he spoke, "I-I….I'm sorry, F-Fluttershy…." Spike couldn't bear to look at Fluttershy, even for a moment, "I-I….didn't mean to yell at you…."

The yellow mare took a few deep breaths to calm herself down. After wiping a few tears from here eyes, she finally spoke, "It's okay, Spike."

Spike, still with his head turned, shook his head, "No….it's not….I had no right to burst out like that…." With a few blinks of his eyes, he alright had a couple tears in his own eyes, "I guess being treated as some kid finally just caught up with me…."

"So is that's why you have been working so hard lately?" Fluttershy asked. She didn't wait for an answer. Instead, she trotted towards the dragon, lightly hugging him.

The action from the mare startled Spike. While in her embrace, Spike's face burned red and his body uncontrollably shook.

Fluttershy continued, "While you are a small, cute little creature, you still have the heart of a dragon." She broke the hug from Spike and gave a warm smile to him. Her face was beaming, even with the recent tears from her eyes.

Her smile and words were sweet to Spike, like the sweetest honey. He couldn't help but blush the same shade of pink as her mane.

Seeing Spike's flustered expression, Fluttershy couldn't help but giggle and blush a bit herself. "You're very cute when you blush, Spike," she couldn't help but make the comment.

Spike tripped over his words. After a series of nonsensical words, phrases, and babbling, he seemed to just give up trying to justifying his embarrassed expression. With a sigh, he laughed at him own reaction to the mare's statement.

Smiling, Fluttershy finally said something that seemed to even surprise herself, "Well, how about we both go have a pleasant take a nap?"

"Huh? But I'm not tired."

"Neither am I."

END

Comments

[beirirangu]

dat implied ending

[Spyro Izuki]

Well that was very lackluster ending.

[Closer-To-The-Sun]

1132507 I know. This exactly isn't my magnum opus. It was more of a 'how can this work' kind of ship.

[Joy Stick]

Spiike + Fluttershy?... Sequel. Now.

[MLP BRONY 27]

wow fluttershy... just wow... sequel?

[Thunderbird Resurrection]

+

[Bareback Writer]

Flutterspike has my support.

[Kenshi]

I like Spike + fluttershy. A short but very nice fanfic

[trahzo]

A nap? Heheheheheheh!

[Frazzled Pony]

D'aaaaw. That's all I can say, that was cute.

[alexanderhunt88]

Short but sweet tale

[Flutterfan457]

Smiling, Fluttershy finally said something that seemed to even surprise herself, "Well, how about we both go have a pleasant take a nap?"

"Huh? But I'm not tired."

"Neither am I."

END

Then everything sexual happened.

[YourNeighborhoodAlicorn]

"Huh? But I'm not tired."
"Neither am I."
END

I assume this is the product of writer's block. I know that feel, I just didn't think someone would actually do it.

Good short story, though I wish there was more.

[Closer-To-The-Sun]

3053378

Believe it or not, it was the product of a poll on deviantArt: seen here

[YourNeighborhoodAlicorn]

3053540

Aw, man, you don't have the normal ending to it?

[Closer-To-The-Sun]

3053565

I had the original end planned and what not, but I figured get some feedback and what not. Apparently they wanted me to be the shipper that I am now known as. That's what I get for creating ships.

[YourNeighborhoodAlicorn]

3053579 Well, that's too bad. I really wish I could see that other ending. You don't think you can send it as a document or something?

[Closer-To-The-Sun]

3053588

If you send a message, I can more or less recreate it if you really wish.

[TheAmazingPeanuts]

Not bad i give it a nice 6.2/10

[Ignaltus]

Short, but good.
Stop a moment! Did Fluttershy call Spike for sleep with her, without they are tired? Good end, bro.

[GingerScribbs]

[one_winged_nightmare]

...and Spike takes a 'nooner' with Fluttershy ;-)

[Geoice]

Nap right

[Equestrian Ghost]

5020878
Yes, a nap...

[HorrorYen]

So they fucked?