After chasing after Rarity for so long without his affection being returned, Spike gives up. But when new feelings surface for a certain librarian, it's up to Spike to discover just what those feelings are and how to deal with them. But to do so, he may have to have some help from his friends. That's what friends are for...right?
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Yeah,Spilight
A bit quick, but dawww.
It was good, but not quite as magnificent as The Dragonborn
Review:
Spike loves Twilight. Now it's noon so he gets donuts. Pinkie Pie helps. Spike goes back home and kisses twilight.
Too fast. Try an 8000 word story. Try a good plot.
The master,
The Jman
Very simple. Principally, you had ignored the will of Twilight.
S'alright, but I was expecting a bit more. I'd cut the first three sentences of the second paragraph. We know who we are here to see in action. Also Spike could talk to more than one of the mane 6.
Oh a SPILIGHT!!!!!!
You sir made my day!
Not bad. But there was one glaring problem. Near the beginning, you kept saying things like "But this isn't about this guy, it's about this guy" or "obviously, everyone was outside doing this thing", which isn't a good idea unless there is a narrarator in the story itself.
Awwwwwwwwww, this story is adorable despite that that went super fast but i loved this story and i wouldn't promise myself that i wouldn't cry
you desreve a round of applause from me
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=barWV7RWkq0
This needs 12,000 words...
2730457 RIGHT?!?! I liked it!! A short and very sweet ship.. I just wish it was longer
@PrinceEpic and JimmyRevSulli
Spike is epic! 
You're wishes may come true but probably not 12,000 words... I'm thinking of making this multiple chapters. Also thank you, I'm glad you both enjoyed it!
This was a real good and cute fanfic if I may say. I am glad Twilight didn't react badly or reject Spike for telling her that he loved her.
2750586
Thank you!
great story
Thanks!
Please tell me you're going to continue this. I think there is a lot of potential here, and I'd love to see how this plays out.
great story
Real nice!
U need a sequel to this story
too fast. She accepted his feelings way too easily.
This sentence directly after they just made out, this author needs to go on a watch list.