Coco Pommel and Roseluck have avoided each other for several years, and during that time memories and reasons have festered into every imaginable reason as to why it would be best for them to stay the hay away from each other. Fate sometimes has a different idea of how things are supposed to go.
Written for Jinglemas 2019 for Marcibel, in the (slight) spirit of my two favorite stories they wrote.
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Wouldn't it make more sense to have Coco try to avoid Suri?
Ah, love. It can hurt like hell, but it can be so worth it too.
Not bad. Interesting pairing.
This was really well done. Interesting choice having them be divorced, with us getting their history through dialogue. The reason they drifted apart felt pretty real, along with their desire to try again.
Love hurts...
But sometimes it's a good hurt
And it feels like I'm alive.
Love sings,
When it transcends the bad things.
Have a heart and try me,
'cause without love I won't survive.
(Incubus - Love Hurts)
Gorgeous. You had to front-load a lot of backstory and heartbreak, but you made it work fantastically. I especially love how we see how time and loss have made Coco much more bitter than when we last saw her, and how Roseluck eventually finds the soft heart still lying under all the emotional scar tissue. Thank you for this.
You can has review!
All one can do is try.