Marble Pie is hoping for a bit of change in her life, but with her father, mother and sister still resistant to it, all she can do is simply stay quiet and soldier on. But that doesn't take away her desire to at least find out what else there is to life besides aching for a lost love, or doing the same thing every day.
This is a Jinglemas story for FanOfMostEverything. The man. The legend. HE WHO WE ALL LOOK FORWARD TO SEEING COMMENTS FROM.
His request for this year was: No genre notes, but I'd like to see something with Limestone and/or Marble Pie.
So here we go!
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Consider me deeply flattered!
I wasn't sure what expect from my prompt, but a lead-in to Marble's scholastic endeavors in the later comics wasn't it. Great work in capturing the rut of the rock farm and a degree of supernatural mystery rarely found in Equestria. Was this time travel? Coincidence? Subtle maneuvering by Luna, patron princess of little sisters suffocating beneath their elders? Whatever the case, wonderful exploration of the quietest Pie. Thank you for it and that incredibly touching author's note. Merry Jinglemas, D.
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I'm glad you liked it! And it's heartfelt man, you're one of the best people here, no joke.
getting a comment from fan of most everything is a pretty fun time
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I know, right? Sometimes I wish this site had the "search for comments by this user" function Derpibooru has.
Huh, interesting.
I've never managed to get my paws on any of the comics, in real life or online but I can tell just from the brief glance you give, they are from there, the Figpaws, and Aura Quartz. It would be interesting to see more of them.
I really admire how you write the Pie sisters, especially Marble. Often, characters like her, can be difficult to get just right. I feel like you walk that line, and squeeze in a bit of intrigue as to more of the personality, the show didn't give us.
The story as a whole, feels like a pebble you picked up, rolled around for quite awhile, figuring out the inner mechanics of how to make the best rock out there, sturdy, smooth, and unbreakable. Thank you for this!
That was a wonderful story. The Pie sisters don't have enough good stories about them, and this was a great one. Call me simple but I love a good woobie, and Marble makes me feel things.
And I agree about FOME. I am lucky enough to be someone he follows and I always look forward to seeing his comments on my stuff. Making comments that aren't completely inane is far too difficult, and so many times have I read a story that I loved and filled me with emotions only to look at the empty box at the bottom and find all coherent thoughts fleeing my mind. And as a writer I know how much a good comment can just completely make my day, and he's so good at them.
This is now a FOME appreciation space. Thanks, 11782906 , for everything you do on this site.