After King Sombra narrowly escapes his demise yet again after his attempts to conquer Equestria. Sombra was weakened and wandered through Equestria only to end up in the Kirin village, completely exhausted. But luckily one talkative Kirin took in the dark unicorn to nurse him back to proper health. Sombra was annoyed by the talkative Kirin, but decided to wait until he returns to full power and crush all who defy him. Only if he survives the Kirin's insistent talking. Or, possibly even warms up to her and see the world in a new light.
The awesome art cover was created by anotherdeadrat
Chapters (3)
Welp, I can't not read this.
Well here’s a pairing I never would have thought of.
When live for a thousand years, your mane, flow like this, it will.
Wow. This is a pairing I never would have expected. Interested in seeing where this goes!
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Yoda? Is that you?
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Hmmm. Speak like this, I do and Yoda, I become. Think that do you? Hmmmm. *wacks you with walking stick.*
Other than that little slip up I’m impressed with your work. I hope to see more of this story in the future.
Mmmm so interesting.
I wait for more.
I would give it a week, and he will turn himself into Celestia...
well this is the most unique kirin fic i've ever read... please continue.
May I ask who drew the cover art? It's really cute.
this is nice
My god, just reading this first chapter alone has me excited to see more.
Sombra could be the MLP Dick Dastardly: his grandiose voice and pathetic nature make him so laughable.
With Blaze as the ultimate comedic foil.
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Ah, I should've known I'd find you here.
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I am infinite, I am eternal.
omg I can see this so easily; how is this NOT cannon!?
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Here is the link to the artist of the cover, if anyone is interested.https://anotherdeadrat.tumblr.com/
Quite, but I'd prefer some peace and quiet better.
Love Sombra channeling Squidward.
The mental image of Autumn squeaking as she excitedly bounces in place is just too adorable.
That rabbit must be related to Angel.
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You are inevitable.
While I'm interested in the story you're telling, the poor grammar is really taking me out of it. That's not even mentioning the sentences that go on for too long and/or are repetitive. I think you'd benefit with an editor, if you can get one.
Have to wonder how much of her talking will it take for Sombra to proclaim he’d rather have no magic than continue to listen.
Amusing so far. Looking forward to another chapter.
I’d like to know that too. I really want some ambience around myself when I conquer- Er, visit, Counterlot.
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That would be great to know. But it seems to be one secret we will never get a real answer to.
Sombra getting humiliated = instant comedy.
Whatever, Squidward.
Oh my gosh. Words can’t describe the emotion I feel. Autumn Blaze is my favourite character alongside Sombrero, and I was already excited to see a fanfic where they interact. Let alone what I experienced when I saw the romance tag and the description. This HAS INTRODUCED ME TO A BEAUTIFUL NEW SHIP. AAAAAAA
References to the emperor's new groove, milo and otis, shrek, and I can't remember where the part about pretty eyes is from but I caught that one too. I am loving these two goofballs.
Honestly, that's why I stopped trying to solve Rubiks cubes too. Too much of a headache
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I think the 'pretty eyes' one also comes from Shrek. I vaguely recall a scene where Donkey says that after getting startled by something and landing in Shrek's arms.
Autumn, I believe this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship!
I feel like this could make for an interesting animation...
This story is getting interesting. However, it would be even better if you used a spell checker. Every word processor has one. In fact, most internet browsers these days have them, too.
Hmm... I’m guessing those dogs nabbed a fake Amulet. Only thing that makes sense.
Took a little while for a new chapter, but the story is pretty good so far. Hope the next chapter comes out soon.
Sorry Sombra, once you call somepony by her name, there ain't no going back.
New chapter was definitely worth the wait. Loving this story, this ship, and especially excited to see where it goes now that the Alicorn Amulet has been thrown into the mix
I loved the artwork that seemed to be made specifically for this story
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Actually, it's the other way around. The story is based on the pics.
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I can't believe you're making him stab her in the back..
Sombra seems ready to cackle evilly.
Mega mind!
Was that Infinity War?
I love Megamind
Lion King and Megamind! Also if this doesn't end with Sombra and Autumn Blaze ruling all of Equestria I am going to be ticked.
“My name is Alexander Hamilton... My name is Alexander Hamilton... There’s a million things I haven’t done, but just you wait, just you wait!”
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He’s still a villain, and you really can’t see the romance forming and his triple-cross coming?
Why do people use colored words? It's lazy. Instead you should just use words to describe who is speaking.
Right here, the color has no use, you've already said who was speaking.
Here, there is no need for color either. Sure there is no line saying "said King Sombra". But we can tell from the context.