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Autumn Blaze tries to find the right way to express how she feels to Derpy. She’s tried so much and couldn’t find the words. Finally the moon gives her the inspiration. Will Derpy really understand though?

Written for the may 2021 pairing contest by Original Pairings

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

I now ship this with every fiber of my being. Well done.

10834425
Thanks. I might have to write something longer with them.:derpytongue2:

10834470
Yesssss. I would absolutely read it!

*Reads story*

...Wow. It actually made sense all this. Wish I had that ability.

RDT

ALERT! ALERT THIS IS NOT A DREAM!
Ah, such a cute story.

Derpy is just... cute as a button. Props for both of them deciding that kissing would, maybe, be a little bit to early.
I thoroughly enjoyed your tale.

Thank you.

I love the way Derpy is written in this.

You know, I've written a lot of lesbian little horse stories, but this one was the first I'd ever read... That was really cute! I liked that a lot! Now, I'm wondering what their second and third dates will be like?

11678503
Interestingly enough I wondered that last night. Maybe we should find out. :derpyderp1:

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