I miss you. Five ever.

TLife after Death
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Slice of Life
Maud helps Starlight recover after Trixie left. Their shared sadness help them discover more.
Sex
Pinkie
Trixie
Maud Pie
Starlight Glimmer
Short-tale · 12k words · 35 6 · 489 views

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Maud tries to escape the pain and loneliness of loss. Nothing seems to help her. She looks to her friend Starlight for help.

Thanks to RDT for his help editing and creating the cover. Thanks also to Symphonic Sync for further suggestions. And of course all my friends at Bean’s Writing Group the happening group to write with.

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Misty Shadow

Misty Shadow #1 · Apr 4th, 2021 · 2 · ·

Very sweet! I love the emotion poured into this with the descriptions you used and how you made us look at things through Maud's perspective. A worthwhile read!

RDT

RDT #2 · Apr 4th, 2021 · 3 · ·

It was a joy to edit this and to draw the cover art. This was a very emotional read.

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #3 · Apr 4th, 2021 · 2 · ·

Was expecting it to be Pinkie Pie given the title. Was not expecting it to be Mud Briar but that just made it hit even harder.

Angel Midnight

Angel Midnight #4 · Apr 4th, 2021 · 2 · ·

That hurt. A lot. Yet at the same time it's beautiful. Definitely worthy of a favourite.

Herald of Opera

Herald of Opera #5 · Apr 4th, 2021 · · ·

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Cover image kinda gives the game away...

Fillyfoolish

Fillyfoolish #6 · Apr 4th, 2021 · · ·

Oh my. Spot on characterization, for whatever that's worth

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #7 · Apr 5th, 2021 · 3 · ·

Oh my God that was pretty sad seeing maud like this so broken and heartbreaking that she's lost somebody and feels like she can't live on but starlight wants to reassure her that she can she really doesn't want her to live like this and she's not alone and she let it all out man that is so heartbreaking

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