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Peter, a human, gets lost in the forest and meets the kirins. One is particularly chatty, so they end up chatting... a lot (I mean, look at the word count) and then they snuggle.
There might also be petting, and non consensual hugs.
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This... Should not be a one shot.
Esto necesito una parte 2 ¡AHORA!
Muy buen fanfic, me morí de ternura por leer esto
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Like... too long of a one shot?
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Gracias por comentar!
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No, you should make more chapters
Write a sequel, this isn't a bad first chapter.
There'd better be hoof-holding and a peck on the nose as they cuddle.
This was cute... I want more!
I like how he starts matching her energy early on in the conversation.
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Maybe in the future. For now I have to finish my other story.
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Oh goodness... not the p-pecks! How could they hold hooves! Not until the third and a half date at least!
This was absolutely adorable.
Absolutely adorable, love how you write Autumn.
I concur with other comnenters that it would be delightful to get some continuation even if this story is relatively self-contained.
Would love to see a continuation of this
An appropiate secondary title for this one shot could be
"Social Anxiety, Like Straight Up 9000 Words Of Just That"
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Same here.
I really enjoyed your story and how you wrote out Autumn as it really fitted her personality in the show, in my opinion.
I do hope that you'll make a continuation, say have it set in the episode when Applejack and Fluttershy arrive at the village as it would be very interesting to seeing Applejack's reaction to meeting a human.
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It was part of the fun, to try and get to her same level.
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Thanks! I had to watch the episode several times and trans-script... transcrybe... TO REPEAT! What Autumn said and copy her speech patterns and OH! Look at me, now I have to de-autumn-ify myself to write and talk normal again. There are a lot of Autumn Blaze fics out there, but I thought that I had to try and capture her essence in the show, specially when talking. Probably I will write more in the future, but right now I want to give my other main story some love. This one took over a month to get done.
And yes, that would be interesting, he would get to meet the other girls and maybe travel with Autumn or something. After stealing the spot as the receiving end of Autumn's barely contained Stream Of Words, how Applejack's first interaction with Autumn would go?
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I would have to write a little bit more so I could title it something like 'Social anxiety over 9000! I mean... over 9000 words'.
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LOL. I like how you choose to capture her essence and absolutely nailed how she spoke. I'll be giving you a blessing on focusing on your other story. *hugs*
Applejack would think that Autumn is related to Pinkie Pie or acts like how she speaks. LOL
I loved the story and hope the will be a sequel one day
It was a soccer ball... or was it a volleyball? He named it Wilson because the brand name on the ball was "Wilson"
Peter patter? Lol
Excellent use of discombobulated. Not a word that too many people use in these stories.
I need to see more.
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you are correct It was a Volleyball and yeah like you said it was named Wilson dew to the name of the company