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Axel Azabash


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A pegasus comes to Earth looking for her place in the world, and now she lives in a park in a far away land from where the Equestria to Earth portal is.

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A nice Slice of Life story.

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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Is she in like Spain or something?

11505858
I think it's pretty obvious she is.
They speak Spanish and it was across the ocean from the USA.

Know what… I won’t mind seeing more stories like this. It would be an interesting twist of ponies kind of living more wild than they did back in their old home in Equestria. Though I hope the little pony gets like a stallion or friends at least so she always being the only one around since she definitely needs friends who aren’t going to judge her for her failed schooling.

Know what… Ponies that aren’t Earth, Pegasi, Unicorn, and even Alicorn might thrive on Earth more like Bat, Snow, Kirin, Flutter, or even Sea Ponies.

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Yes, she is in Spain. If you pay close attention you can locate the specific city and park she's living in. And Yes, I was thinking about writing more of this, maybe once every season and describe the place in summer, fall, spring and winter and the things that happen there. And also yes... once the novelty of living like that wears out, she will start to feel lonely and some friends would have to come into the picture.

This is in a low priority list, but I would like to continue it at some point. I just need to have free time and go to the park for inspiration and things for a pegasus to do.

11506215
That’s pretty cool. Do I need to track this story?

I’ve seen some similar stories like this for example there was one about pegasi stealing from hotels. I definitely could see someone make a short story of a pony taking care of an old poor human out in the streets or street performing.

If you do get inspired can’t wait to see other seasons are like in Spain. As well for the little pony getting a few friends… won’t it be funny if the city decided to get a pony for her? Like a foal :twilightblush:

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I'll probably write one shots because I want to add pictures of different parts of the park for every little story. And yes, this story was inspired by Admiral Biscuit's ones about ponies on Earth.

11506449
That’s find and awesome I liked that series

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