When anon finds himself in the center of a kirin village, he's left to piece a lot of things together. How did he wind up in such a strange and colorful land inhabited by a adorable quadrupeds? Why can't anything speak yet understand his language? A talkative autumn themed kirin might be able to provide the answers anon needs in his unfortunate situation.
(Story takes place in first person)
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I haven't read your story yet but I just have to say that the cover art you're using is ingenious
Show Don't Tell is ignored, the grammar is bad (i, capitalisation, etc) and the self-insert is unlikable, to say nothing of the wish fulfillment plot that takes no creative liberty with it's tired formula. The dialogue comes across as stilted and the characterisation is over the top. Despite all this, there's little to make it memorable or even just stand out.
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I'm glad you took the time to comment man. I'm not going to delete any criticism, and yeah i'll take what your saying into consideration for future works/ chapters.
thanks!
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Thanks! I made it myself.
I saw nothing to hate on it. Honestly I think there isn't enough here to judge yet other then the random tag. I am generally weary of that tag as most authors use it is as an excuse to throw all sense out the window which is ok-ish for discord centrinc stories. Care to explain why you choose that tag?
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i kind of thought that with how weird and spastic autumn could be at times that it would make sense. looking at it now though that's sort of just expected from her character and not really the story itself. Thanks for letting me know!
Okay I love it and I need more. There are literally zero other stories with Kirin and humans and this is my go-to source
Also, there is an Autumn Blaze tag now :)
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Awh thanks! I haven't kept up with it since life has been in the way. I'm glad to know you like it! I may start working on it again here in a few days.
I know it hasn’t been that long since the last update, but i’m really curious, is the story still being worked on? There aren’t many out there like it so I’m pretty invested.
Did you continue the story ...?
Never ...