• Member Since 10th Oct, 2011
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Pascoite


I'm older than your average brony, but then I've always enjoyed cartoons. I'm an experienced reviewer, EqD pre-reader, and occasional author.

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Years ago, Octavia still loved music. Years ago, Luna thought she might yet do some good from her prison. Years ago, Vinyl Scratch found herself in an interminable dream.

One night could set them all free.


Silver medalist in the Writeoff Association's "On the Wings of a Dream" event.

Featured on Equestria Daily!

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Comments ( 11 )

This was lovely. I thought it was vague enough to capture the trippy dream essence without explaining too much.

So Luna tried to help Octavia initially, succumbed to her Nightmare Moon side, and returns every night to torture herself? And Vinyl is there because she's just a swell kid who wants ponies around her to be happy, I'll gather.

9952869
Yup, you interpreted it all correctly. I'm guessing someone that perceptive must be a baseball fan.

9952886
I'd love a sequel where Luna recognizes them and hires them to do a duet for her.

In the box once more, my old friend, congratulations.

Man who is chopping onions

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9953068
And they refuse because they recognize her as that horrible monster who tormented their dreams?

This was really good. I really enjoyed how you weaved between Luna and NIghtmare Moon's perspectives so seamlessly. I wish I could pull something like that off!

9953457
Hours hat no!? Why would you think that?

I’m pretty sure vinyl realized what was going on with luna

9954223
Yeah, Vinyl figured her out and how she could use the angry version of her to her advantage, though since this is before Luna's return, she doesn't know who Luna and Nightmare Moon are.

9954277
Thanks

Yeah I hope there’s a sequel for this

Congrats on getting featured on Equestria Daily! Cool story.

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