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Cereal-Killer


Oh? You're approaching my userpage? Instead of reading away, you're reading closer to me?

Comments ( 39 )

Well, this is not quite what I was expecting. But I like it.


I was honestly expecting an Anon story, with him having no conflict at all with any ponies and the changlings were just extremely curious about him.

But this is fine

As a Bugbutt fan I approve of this story!:pinkiehappy:

Leaning closer to her ear you whispered "What's the magic word?"

Avada kedavra

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Can I bug you about updating your Ghost Rider story?

I like this, do me a favor and don't be like so many authors and get one or two chapters into a great story, goin strong, then put it on hiatus till 3455, aka years, as it is just rude n annoyin to readers, not callin you out, but as of late I comment somethin like this every time I see a great story pop up, to hopefully convince the guy writin it to continue it when they feel down or whatever, either way keep the good shit comin, lol

i mean, the human is correct Chrysalis > Celestia, its just not a contest

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Been writing in S.P too often these days, I keep lapsing back into it lol

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Well, i am working on my SlenderMare story right now.

Just so you know cereal-killer, the cover was drawn by both of them. It was a collaboration. :)

I am intrigued, hope to see more soon.

You had my attention




Now you have my erection

I agree with your last statement

Eh, feels a bit rushed but it's only the first chapter so I guess you can still iron out the kinks. Seriously need to give it a once over on first/second person perspective. This seems to jarringly switch between I, me, my/you, your, you're really often for such a short chapter. Still has a lot of room to grow and is pretty decent otherwise. Sadly I'm getting burned out on generic snarky sex god anon stories so I'mma pass but good luck with this.

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Gah, more of them got past me. I'm terrible at picking errors like that up.

Thanks for giving the story a chance at least. Hopefully I can turn it into a story worth picking up again.

I wouldn't forget that night, but not for the reasons Luna hoped. I still had nightmares involving whips, chains and that fucking horn.

... Navarone? Is that you?

god dang cliff hanger.

loved it

Upon noticing my bed partner, the royals had a collective seizure. The Unicorn charged his horn, causing me to put my hands up in response. "Remember your big boy words, Shining! REMEMBER YOUR BIG BOY WORDS" noticing the spell charging, I leaned over, putting myself in front of Chrysalis. "WAIT, DON'T-" The world went pink.

Oh good god!! Things are getting rough!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

I wouldn't forget that night, but not for the reasons Luna hoped. I still had nightmares involving whips, chains and that fucking horn.

Who are you, nav

"One hundo percent the truth, the vampire even threw a road maintenance vehicle on the kid right after."

ROAD ROLLLAAAR DAAA ...
OSOI FUKATSU KANOYO, MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA

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This taste, is the taste of a Jo Jo reference.

I mockingly staggered, clutching at my heart. "I've been wounded. I'm... not the best? Like no one ever was?" I straightened out as Chrysalis rolled her eyes at my acting. "Well, I'll change that. Mark my words." I wasn't gonna be second fiddle to anyone.

Ash, never did live up to that song.

A few grammar errors, but a good chapter nevertheless! Great job!:moustache:

Fucking, Armor!:facehoof:

jake isn't cool enough to be nav, plus he's too chill. Nav wouldn't go away without a weapon of some kind.

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They actually stopped using the "gotta catch 'em all" line because they realized he was less than 10% of the way to doing that.

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or "Hail Hydra," whatever floats your goat

10/10, Love the Princess bit

Hot. A Queen and a Princess! Fucking yeah!:moustache:

having just read another porn with plot fic, going to assume they were on the other side of the door wanting to see who was going to win.

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The winner is obviously Anon. Let's hope they have an ice pack ready in the morning, he might be walking bowlegged for a day. :rainbowlaugh:

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naw he will be right as rain when he wakes up in a week after his mating spell side effect induced coma is over

now wondering if luna will ever get a taste...

"Just shut up, you're giving me a headache." My mood was thoroughly soured, and as we strolled into the hall, I could see the two other royals enjoying a light conversation.

Dude, I know why your acting like some pissed in your drink but come on! Your being a total asshole and she's trying to make amends while your making a dick of yourself.

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Well hello me from 3 years ago. Still enjoy this story as much as I did back then, too bad it looks like the author may have left fimfiction. Ah well.

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