Scrapping this as theres enough inconsustencies would need rewrites
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okay, the whole sub point of them doing this to him need to be brought up instead of some off hand apology. this is the only negative I dislike about this story and HIE like this story. IF the ponies screw someone over that didn't harm them in any way or did something that could've made things worst then they need to be called out on their crap.
So did luna forget what she was strictly told by one of the main personalities in control told her about his psyche and how her intrusion had led to him being pushed to his mental limit.
Also why invite someone to dinner like its mandatory when your pretty much forcing them to go.
Is Kent smart enough to know that Cadance is the one who sent a letter to the other alicorns which started this whole Luna invading his mind in the first place. I want to see Kent's counter argument against claims since during this whole story he has yet to display physical violence towards anyone.
thanks for this, other than Flurry_heart not giving a reaction to the intrusion it had the points the characters needed to express so that to move on the road of being forgiven for their actions.
Well Cadance at least who actually felt guilt for her actions while Luna tried to justify her actions even though earlier she tried to apology. What that meant was she would probably try to do it again if he didn't warn Discord to tell her not to which is probably going to be taken the wrong way by her.
Discord playing best bro was the best part of the chapter for me, Besides Flurry_heart he is the only friend that Kent has at this point.
Kent and Flurry_heart's gradually developing relationship is moving at a nice pace.
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I want to see Luna get a taste of her own medicine
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I don't see how that is possible without things going wrong for Kent, they didn't care that she forced herself into his mind and are already hostile around him due to his developing chaos magic. The only way for luna to get retribution is from a third party completely unrelated to Kent and that's if they haven't chosen to monitor him along with other things to make surethey know every being that he had came into contact with.
Of course this could be paranoid on my part, I'm sure Cadance or shining_armor aren't doing anything like that since because of the trust they have in Flurry_heart.
Kent, be wary of celestia, her phrase 'it seems you have more control over your magic than we originally thought' has me worried.
Also she was not worried about your injuries only concerned about what and how he did in a fight against king sombra instead of who he was fighting for.
The celestia and luna in this story aren't to be trusted, proven that about once for both of them so far. Its only a matter of time before they do something rash. Maybe its just a case of paranoia on my part.
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What disabilities are they exactly?