I woke up to a burning building coming down on top of me.
Oh yeah, that isn't even the half of it. There's these freaky Technicolor horses everywhere too and a few of them were dressed in golden armour.
They bound me, dragged me to the castle and hooked me up to some chains. Currently I'm being interrogated by a white unicorn... guard. Whatever it's called.
Well, it's not like it could get much worse, right?
Rated teen for suggestive situations and bad language
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Found some cover art.
Sorry to whomever made this, but the source website was taken down or something, so I'm really not sure who to credit.
Finally found the name of the artist: Blaz Portenta
I got featured a couple times. Yeah, I'm surprised too.
5k to 8k would be ok it usually means the chapters come out faster than trying to write 10k+ words every time.
I have no idea what is going on... Non at all,
6780172 Neither do I, and I've been writing it.
This whole story is one crazy thing after another with no signs of stopping.
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Ima read dis
Really nice story.
Definitely going in my tracking
I feel like this is a reference
As soon as I read this, I knew it was coming
There it is
6832691 Not to my knowledge.
All I can say about this so far, is thank you for making me laugh like an idiot! I'm serious, this is absolutely hilarious.
Keep the laughs a coming!
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The length of the chapters seems pretty good.. Don't limit yourself maybe some chapters will be longer some shorter though personally I hate very short chapters
this story, i like it. you haz get like unt fav
Wow fave. Much like.
Hmmm, this needs more cow bells.
6855042 I shall endeavour to bring in more tactical cow bells, as suggested.
Honestly, this could use a good editing. Not going to continue from here because of that, though this has potential.
I tried the same, only called it ponily. Your word seems to be better though.
Nice reference. Loved that comic strip too!
Truth be told, i personally like smaller chapters. So that I can stop more easily reading, if I want to take a break and don't have to stop in the middle of a chapter.
6885815 this comment made me realise that I accidentally put the wedding chronologically before Discord.
I love the constant guard jokes in this fic!
I hope she is going to act like that around him in the future too!
Good question! Was Moonflower's assault real?
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You're over-complicating it with quotation marks and missing some of them as a result.
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pick one?
missing space. textwalls.
Jesus mate, proofread maybe?
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Thestrals are batponies.
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...And I'm not even trying to proofread, I just mark whatever hurts my eyes.
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-er, means something doing something. like fight-er, driv-er. dude why.
something is missing. a pronoun, probably.
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she
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a piss, probably. But I'm no Brit, so...
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is that even a word?
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castle. probably even Castle, because referring to a certain one
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Wow should be capitalized
Good should me capitalized
I'm?
6893243 Thanks for these comments, they're actually rather helpful.
Bat ponies are Thestrals. Thestrals can eat meat, have webbed wings, and have reptilian irises, just like bat ponies.
They are one and the same.
6893908 the Thestral scene is really really unclear who's talking and trying to attack him. It really, really looked like Luna was doing it and that you called her a "thestral".
Am I the only one who hates it when fics do that?
I never thought 4th wall breaking can be considered funny. I don't just mean in reference to this fic, I mean it generally.
Otherwise, the only gripe I have is slow updates.
I ship them, even though there is no Romance tag!
Well, this has been fun! Look forward to more, should more be on the way!
6912622 Soon.
(This is where I would put the image if my images weren't being dumb.)
6912814 Of course!
(This is where I would put MY image, if the site wasn't having a problem!)
Let the shit storm begin once again.
How does Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and/or Prince Blueblood sound like he/she "wants a corndog"?
That was Shining-armour
He could use illusion magic to skip out of the exercises!
My shipping sense is tingling!
Who would have thought that I was dead on like that in my last comment of the last chapter?
Wow, that's actually pretty dark. In a way he is planning genocide there!
While picking a princess I was expecting him to take a jab at Luna and Celestia by saying Twilight is the only one of the bunch that could possibly fathom what he is saying whenever he unloads scientific knowledge.
Moarplz
Yes plz. :)
...can we make it happen? I mean...Moon does like the guy.
He's an idiot!
OH, COME ON! THEY WERE SO CLOSE!
So close and yet so far...
You are spooning the wrong pony, John...
Well, maybe they will get together in one of the next chapter?
6874083 This, Id offer to do it but I'm busy with college, all the same I'll follow it and hope it gets edited one day.
Ok.... When did John start channeling Deadpool?
6959516 I'll think about it...
6964642 Because Lavan is odd like that.
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He always was.
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It will happen.
It will be much more awkward when it does.