god dang cliff hanger.

loved it

Upon noticing my bed partner, the royals had a collective seizure. The Unicorn charged his horn, causing me to put my hands up in response. "Remember your big boy words, Shining! REMEMBER YOUR BIG BOY WORDS" noticing the spell charging, I leaned over, putting myself in front of Chrysalis. "WAIT, DON'T-" The world went pink.

Oh good god!! Things are getting rough!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

"One hundo percent the truth, the vampire even threw a road maintenance vehicle on the kid right after."

ROAD ROLLLAAAR DAAA ...
OSOI FUKATSU KANOYO, MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA

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This taste, is the taste of a Jo Jo reference.

I mockingly staggered, clutching at my heart. "I've been wounded. I'm... not the best? Like no one ever was?" I straightened out as Chrysalis rolled her eyes at my acting. "Well, I'll change that. Mark my words." I wasn't gonna be second fiddle to anyone.

Ash, never did live up to that song.

A few grammar errors, but a good chapter nevertheless! Great job!

Fucking, Armor!

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They actually stopped using the "gotta catch 'em all" line because they realized he was less than 10% of the way to doing that.

"Just shut up, you're giving me a headache." My mood was thoroughly soured, and as we strolled into the hall, I could see the two other royals enjoying a light conversation.

Dude, I know why your acting like some pissed in your drink but come on! Your being a total asshole and she's trying to make amends while your making a dick of yourself.