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DouglasTrotter
What fills and soothes the soul will vary, but for me, I will not know until I try.
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You know, I'm not usually a fan of the isekai genre, but since it's rare to find some good stories like this, I'm willing to give this a chance.
But let me give you an advise as a writer, before you post a new chapter, read the whole to find some errors so you can improvise.
Nice, i always love a good story with amazonian ponies :) keep it up dude :)
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Amazonian, plus ABS, that is a good shit.
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Were there any errors that especially stood out for you in the chapter? I'm just curious. Unfortunately, my main forte is technical writing, and I've struggled with actual story writing ever since I started writing fan-fic stuff back in 2010/2011.
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Alright, there's one big mistake you should notice, is how you're writing the "O" instead of "Oh" in the dialogues and some parts of your narration.
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Ahh, gotcha. I'm used to the letter O vs. Oh. I looked it up real quick and it seems that O is acceptable, however it's an archaic form of Oh. I'll be more mindful about those types of things. Thank you for the heads up.
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Anytime. Hey, one question, will the next chapters will be longer? It's just I'm not used with 1k chapters
Another pretty good chapter, and I see you improved a lot than the last chapter, good job. I just can't wait for the excitement adventures :3
Isekai
This is the first time I've heard of it until I looked it up and it was a type of anime genre.
How could I have missed that? =/
Sorry about the late reply here, I did want to give an update on things.
The latest chapter is in the works. Right now, it's about 75% written/completed. I had to cut down on my writing time due to Dorian twirling around and needing to prepare some supplies. At this current point in time, I'm still keeping my fingers crossed the area I'm in will be spared. The problem is that might be looking less and less likely right now with the current track. On the other hand however, there's still some wiggle room.
I'm hoping to push out the newest chapter by 8pm tonight, about 8pm tomorrow night by the latest if things go well.
Glad to hear you've avoided Dorian.
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Thanks, I was really, really nervous at the start of it. Dorian brought back thoughts of Irma and how I kept hoping it would move away, but Irma didn't move away and nailed us rather good. I'm pretty thankful Irma didn't devastate me or my area too badly like others got hit. I was only without power for about a week with some minor damage that needed some elbow grease to fix.
Question, is your story OC-centric? Or are you gonna make Chris meet the Main 6?
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Being serious, the protagonist will meet the mane6. Several things are being hashed out in some drafts at the moment as I want to make the story feel as fluid as possible. This way, when the protagonist meets encounters the mane6, it feels natural akin to bumping into someone vs. the idea of "protagonist is special and meets the mane6" type of thing.
Good chapter can't wait for the next one.
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Ah I see what you mean, but the protagonist will... you know, with the members of the Main 6?
I think ya need more description between dialogue. It makes it confusing on what anyone is doing without some explanation to things
You said things are heating up... Does that mean....?
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I bet its another c-block moment. I can tell.
Either that or I'm wrong.
To tell the true I have no idea how I'm supposed to feel about the MC. Up till now the only thing I know about him is he's an asshat a creep and a coward and apparently he has the libido control of a 12 year old that just hit puberty. Also and I might be wrong with this one but the story is throwing up red flags that's scream "This story is about emasculating the inferior human male because ponies are the ubermensch."
Doctor Trasnfusion?
Good chapter is good! I enjoyed it and think it will be interesting to see what is going to happen next, between the upcoming Sexy Chapter and the possibility of hoodlums I'm rather excited!
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Sorry, I must have missed that typo. I'll scan through the story real quick and fix it.
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I know right? It's like he's an anime character who he's suppose to be an adult, yet he acts like a child.
Your writing is messy because you need to use more commas.
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I'm sorry you didn't enjoy the chapter. I will try to do better in the next one.
In terms of commas, I'm torn due to the amount of finesse required to use them appropriately.
I was taught and told back in the old days of the late 80's/early 90's. My teachers came down hard kids who used commas. Those teachers said that a comma is the poor man's choice of not knowing how to form a proper sentence. Every student was told a true sentence should stand on its own merits without the need of commas. They also said too many commas within a work shows the writer's immaturity.
Now, as far as the devil's advocate/flip side of the coin, I've also been taught and told commas have their uses, but it isn't easy. Good, judicious use of colons, semicolons, and commas can create a powerful piece of literature, allowing that piece to take on a life of its own. I'm sad to say such use requires an incredible amount of skill and tact, from my point of view at least. I fully admit I have neither skill or tact at my disposal to use commas appropriately or effectively, nor do I have the capability to understand them.
At the end of the day, I'll just keep on trying.
9863369 That's not all, the other thing that bothers me is this.
So Chris had a tiny penis? What the fuck?
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Sorry all, I wanted to write up a quick note and issue an apology. The next chapter will be a little late.
Long story short, I caught some weird bug and had to sleep it off, which cost me about two, near three days worth of work on the next chapter. The story is being tweaked right now with the first part being 90% complete, the middle portion 50% complete, and the end portion being hashed out. I'll be sure to push the update out tomorrow, Tuesday by the "absolute" latest. I'm still struggling at the moment with the remnants of this stupid bug, but I should hopefully be over it. I hate being sick.
How tall are the alicorns?
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It depends.
To be serious and answer the question, it depends upon the alicorn. There are some... "special" things I've laid the groundwork for in current and upcoming chapters -- some groundwork still being made and fleshed out -- so I do not want to reveal too much. Sorry to be cryptic, I just hate the idea of spoiling things because I enjoy writing this story so much. What I can say for certain is that alicorns are taller than the... let's say "average" pony.
this was going through my head when lina showed up
https://youtu.be/a0WmLwr83-4?t=1
Equivalent exchange at its finest. full metal alchemist?
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For the readers out there, I'm still here, still kicking. Things have been a bit rocky between Covid-19, IRL stuff, etc..., so the chapter update I hoped to get out last November got a little on the *ahem* delayed side.
The story is still in the works with new chapters being cooked up. I've got an outline, sorta, and I'm working towards future updates.
So... stay tuned.
is this history dead?