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......... what the fuck was that?????
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Hey thank you for reading, did you mean that in a good or bad way though? XD
Is good but I got lost fast. Maybe more episode will make me see clear
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I understand, some parts I feel like weren't dwelved in deeply enough, but in the next few chapters I hope to touch base on a few of the things, thank you :)
Yeah, it's a good read so far. Keep up the good work!
Well, as this is only first chapter I must say it is rather well paced. There are no jarring grammatical errors and so far story is going as smoothly as can be expected:
Guy in unnatural storm gets teleported with entire dorm on unknown territories without anyone else.
Protagonist seems to posses analytical mindset without any overblown traits and author has managed to turn his past into a mystery of sorts(I am assuming that the grandfather who was only tall person in entire family was also previous owner of the macguffin device)
All in all, liked, put on tracking list, wants moar.
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truth be told, it's actually his great-grandfather, but I'm trying to take a bit of my own viewpoints for it honestly. My grandparents raised me, so to me they're my parents, and my great grandparents were my g-parents. But I'll make sure to clear that up in future chapters, thank you :)
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Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it :)
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No problem Doc.
I don't mind that you did the picture in Paint but you do realize you have the mini circles in the wrong spots right?
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Aww fudge I do? Sorry, I created all this super late last night, battling a cold atm as well so I apologize. I just did not want to use any generic or pre-made artwork, as I did not wish to steal peoples work to use for my own stuff.
alright i will give this my thumbs up. just keep it up.
Why use a voice to text software?
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It's for personal reasons, for me it's faster then typing it out
interesting idea hope to see more
ok so other than the chapters being a bit short. i have to admit you have made this story into one of my top favorite stories.
The Scent: The Lust of Mares was the first story I ever read on this sight. My friend showed it to me as a joke. Ahhh good times
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Surprisingly enough tho, it's a good, to me at least, story, that I really enjoyed. People seem to think that stuff with sex or whatnot is also a bad thing, but it's not, IF it's done right that is
Damn, I remember when I read The Scent: The Lust of Mares for the first time.... I was expecting worse odds for Custos honestly, but I'm not going to jinx it. Great read you have so far!
Will you update this story soon?
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Been in a bit of a slump, between work and gaming and life, but yes, I do intend to continue this story, you actually helped me make that decision, since I dont get many comments, so thank you XD
8972998 No problem dude
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More?
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Soon yes, about halfway thru, just in a bit of a writing slump lately, sorry
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Its cool dude I know how it is.
he is gonna get sooooo laid
Nightmare moon. check
Changeling: check = Changelings: underdevelopment
Spony: underdevelopment
Sea ponies/sirens/other sea ladies: not confirmed yet
Dragons: not confirmed yet
etc.....
all those children
oh and enjoyed, was re-reading it and then NEW CHAPTER!!?!
For air
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Not sure why you had to post a full paragraph to show me that, but...I appreciate it? Will fix
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Sorry I was just using the “ button It auto save the prior paragraph I found your story by random and I really liked XY Chromosomes, and The Scent: Lust of Mares but they dont get updated anymore I’m glad someone still doing the world building of those stories I added it to my favorites I’ll be keeping track of this
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I read this way after you published the chapter XD
Anyway I enjoyed it, but your grammar makes it a bit hard to get through. The dialogue feels a bit weird with all those dots, but maybe that's just me.
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Sorry, just trying to add pauses between them to try to give the conversation more life, so to speak
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I get that. But it might be distracting for other readers as well. Just trying to give advice, not attacking your writing.
Just realized... The Yin and Yang symbol in your picture has an error
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You're not the first.........or second.....or third person to tell me that. I appreciate the comment though, I guess
Glad to see you haven’t given up on the story can’t wait for the next chapter
MORE, DAMMIT!! MORE!!
I hope you post soon. I'm almost done with my story bro and we used to post fairly close in the beginning XD
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In a bit of a slump recently, lost job and whatnot, have the next chapter finished like a quarter, but eh, Im definitely not stopping it, just no motivation atm
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Damn sorry to hear it bro.
Hello there. I managed to finish up my story with a grand total of 225k words. If I could do it then so can you, because I'm some random swede living in cold ass north with no formal writing skills what so ever.
(*How does one motivate?*)
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Well you'll be happy to know I finally posted the next chapter lol
Hah nice, the "Element of harmony" is like an infernal thing for Custos... now to re-read the whole story again =w= to see if the idea fits with what has happened and said till now and the story back in the mind for later chapters :3
welcome back 
Good you got through your auto accident
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Thank ya kindly, I appreciate it. Also yeah, seeing as how there were "Lords" before Equestria in my story, it kinda ties into the title lol
Ah, good to see that you are still in good health and willing to keep writing the story. As long as you enjoy doing this, just keep on doing it.
more
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Ok, WTF happened to Custos? It's bad enough Twilight is just being a paranoid Xenophobic/Racist Bitch to our Human Protagonist.
But, this "Harmony" Magic in his dream have just FRICKIN tortured him like some mess up Silent Evil/Evil Within Horror Show?!
This "Harmony" is a LIE! Corrupted, and possibly sadistic evil. It must be PURGED!!!!
I hope an update comes soon it’s been far to long