coolcatnate
Joined 18th Feb, 2018 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- coolcatnate · 2.7k words · 33 3 · 1.3k views
- coolcatnate · 5.7k words · 38 9 · 1.2k views
- coolcatnate · 3.1k words · 25 4 · 1.1k views
- Hichigo · 21k words · 155 41 · 4.1k views
- SolidSparkle117 · 73k words · 17 13 · 1.1k views
- coolcatnate · 11k words · 82 14 · 2.7k views
- Azvameth Rose · 6k words · 18 3 · 1.5k views
- Shadow-Mane · 112k words · 79 14 · 2.5k views
Stats
Page generated in 0.11 seconds
Total duration
1,064 users online
2,147,942 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
good start but what about your other stories am not saying to create a new story but you need too do the story first please🙂
Is there a chance their will be barb the dragon, eris the god of mischief in this story?. Also great start of the story I like it
i agreed with darkangel864 barb and eris be good in this too 😄
9467786
Thanks for the notice
Definitely a different start compared to other FOE stories. Also you might want to fix the images, can't see any of them.
YES ERIS AND BARB ARE IN THIS STORY YAY!!!
OOOOHHHH YYYYEEEEEAAAAAHHH ERIS AND BARBS ALONG WITH DEMON TWILIGHT
👍👍👍
Ok wasnt expecting demon twilight what dlnext vampires fluttershy or werewolf aj?
Those aren’t zombie guards those are Death Knights!
They are not going easy on him are they
9617087
Nope
This is going to be good. Great story dude keep it up
What pictures?
Are the Main 6 gonna appear and be part of the harem?
9617175
The last chapters
9617349
Oh right my bad
9617349
You did not explain how Barb, D. Twilight, Eris, and Ember meet Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Umbrum?
9568744
honestly, would be interesting...
that...THAT right there... I wanna see that with a chibi nergigante!
9685426
Yup I'm surprised u saw that it was an old comment. Just catching up?
camo.fimfiction.net/7nPMGgHajREGn9Hw-KmhGC3GOBoiW9lFSdttYtWqXyA?url=https%3A%2F%2Flh6.googleusercontent.com%2FwDQ3JUSMiRDtecJjRltYX-TSd32VUkOWceI2LyGmQnwAsCLSrtUxcK8r53IhvQElHGzmRUV0_ssIzipXFF-CJrfhW-kvQwDC1OEI7D0L5sOCqsjFhkyZ3AZOyZ2HS7EwJzwte-Ef
Informative: This picture is not allowed on the site.
9712878
Am I allowed to put it in a link?
9712931
Response: You can put this https://www.fimfiction.net/story/432483/the-savior#comment/ 9712931 but not a link.
9712972
I guess I'll use different pictures then
9712979
Response: You're welcome.
This getting an update?
9754632
Working on it I just posted it something for another story. Another 5-hour energy drink down the hatch
Not trying to be rude but when will the next chapter be posted?
Why hasn't everybody else respond to this piece of mess up "tragic story" crap that I ever seen before me!?
I was gonna like this story, honest. But reading this two god awful sentences ruined it for me.
https://y.yarn.co/90439429-eaf4-43ce-bae0-0a1724eaab73_text.gif
Firstly, f******* four hundred!!!??? The f*** do they all even come from!!?? That is impossible for that many to go after one boy!?
That is way too unrealistic, and illogical!? Even for a fanfic like this. This ain't nasty hentai rape or anything. And even they DIDN'T make this ludicrous scenario. Ever!
Plus, this seems totally unnecessary and meaningless. Because in the next two chapters, the girls just frickin ignored or forget about this, and you unintentionally retcon it anyway by erasing his terrible memories from that. And instead, make Jack into a super dense moron like a typical dumbass male harem protagonist.
I'm not personally insulting your character just for kicks. That's just how it looks to me, and it's straight facts that he acts like a unoriginal dense male harem protagonist from many animes.
What's the point of it then? IF it's gonna get erased rather easily, mind you? Personally, I will never made that unnecessary tragic dark story in the first place. When it is already pointless anyway.
Just make him normally shy to girls, or he already knows they all love him. But, he can't really express his own feelings. And those are realistic personality traits. You don't have to come up with a over complicated, over-the-top, and unrealistic raping/torturing fest like this is from a bad wattpad fic.
And second. It's rather f*** up to do that to your own OC anyway. I won't do that to my own characters.
And thirdly, it doesn't make him a "emo badass". No offense, but in reality. That's just making him a depressing and rather weak-ass bitch for letting himself get captured, then horribly get raped and tortured by pathetic and mess up evil whores.
IF I was him. I would have easily defend myself, escaped, and mow down those pathetic and evil thots to bloody bits before the raping/torturing even begin.
That's just my opinion. And no hard feelings.
Did you see my justified criticism?
How come you've cancelled all your stories?