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coolcatnate


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You side kidnapped by slavers twice

This is a really good story so far, hope u make more soon :pinkiehappy:

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Can you point it out in the story so I can fix it?

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Can you pointed out

Mother of God...
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:facehoof:

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Doesn't show up until later in the story.

Looks interesting but you really need to work on your spelling, grammar and pacing.

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Nice little story but a lot of grammar and spelling errors if you need an editor I'll be able to help

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Yeah spelling is not my strong suit just point out the ones you see and put them in the comments plus the stories more like one shot I get an idea and run with it unlike the others

Ok this is terrible fic now.
You RUSHED EVERYTHING!
This fic is garbage now! You threw everything in here gave him several hundred girlfriends in five secs flat.
the the bit on Blood blood was so fat the Road Runner still trying to catch up!

Or let me put this way in one simple name....GARY STU! ECHOS ECHOS ECHOS ECHOS Echos echos echos echos echos....

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You do know in the description of the story it said a One-Shot story and that it uses anime logic right?

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oh yeah ok that makes everything better,........NOT
I'm sorry but even anime logic not this bad.


I have a bunch of other stuff want tos ay but...no no. I'm just going to leave.

I think the image of skys clothing not there what does she wear?

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Actually I got permission to use the temple from him.

"DAY IN AND DAY OUT, I RISE AND I FALL, I BRING LIGHT TO THE DAY AND SHINE THROUGH OUT THE UNIVERSE WHAT AM I?"

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correct, next riddle.
"i come out only at night, but several planets have at least one or more of me, i circle around the planets to keep them in a balanced orbit, while my job is important only one of me circles the earth, what am i?"

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I asked if I could use the temple and he or she agreed to it if you do not believe me go to the story and look in the comments section

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I did indeed give you permission. And good use of the temple you did do. Excellent story.

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Thank you. Master Yoda (if you read it sounds like Master Yoda)

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I know. I didn't realize till after I sent it.

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correct, now this is a free for all question and my final riddle, who ever get's it right will not only get to help out on coming up with new ideas but i will make special requests for future stories.
here is the last and final riddle.
"my story began in 1908 with the launch of my sister Olympic, launched in 1911 fitted out in march 1912, sea trials in April, then set out in that same month for my maiden voyage, sadly i never completed my voyage for i struck an ice berg and sank in 2 hours and 40 minutes, my story is told again and again, with new pieces of my story being uncovered, my story is famous, not for being the largest afloat, nor being the safest, so who am i?"

That reminded me of a fic called a man's furry lovers somewhat

Is there going to be an update anytime

Good chapter can't wait for the next chapter. 😀

And I hope the ones who hurt Jay will be burning in equis hell

I am loving the story so keep up the good work. I cannot wait for the next one the next chapter in this it's so all good nice touch with him having to Dick's though.

He forgives Celestia.

Meh he will forgive her but not fully if she hadn't accepted to have Jay as her child. Jay wouldn't have been abused by the humans so technically it's her fault for not taking him as her own infant

Confusion complete and utter confusion. For their meeting.

Comment posted by coolcatnate deleted Apr 22nd, 2019

Confusion then anger but forgiveness to return fluttershy and the rest to ponyville

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It better because I gave them permission to use the design of the temple.

I wrote "A Man's Furry Lover's" after all

More give me more I need more chapters

I heard shuffling before I felt someone slap me across the cheek. I slowly put my hand on my cheek and looked up at who slapped me. I saw daybreaker standing in front of me tears running down her face and slowly fell to the ground.

That was highly unnecessary. :ajbemused:


“I want it in my plot hole master!” So pull out the cock that was in her pussy and let rest on her back as I forced all of my cum out one of my cocks causing her belly to to swell a little bit. When I finish I picked her up and laid her down in the bed and then snuggled up next to her as we fell asleep.

So what was even the point of taking that non-pregnancy potion, if he doesn't creampie her in the first place!?

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