WOOOOHOOO you're back
he is gonna get sooooo laid

Nightmare moon. check
Changeling: check = Changelings: underdevelopment
Spony: underdevelopment
Sea ponies/sirens/other sea ladies: not confirmed yet
Dragons: not confirmed yet
etc.....

all those children

oh and enjoyed, was re-reading it and then NEW CHAPTER!!?!

9137555
Not sure why you had to post a full paragraph to show me that, but...I appreciate it? Will fix

9137664
Sorry I was just using the “ button It auto save the prior paragraph I found your story by random and I really liked XY Chromosomes, and The Scent: Lust of Mares but they dont get updated anymore I’m glad someone still doing the world building of those stories I added it to my favorites I’ll be keeping track of this

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I read this way after you published the chapter XD

Anyway I enjoyed it, but your grammar makes it a bit hard to get through. The dialogue feels a bit weird with all those dots, but maybe that's just me.

9154010
Sorry, just trying to add pauses between them to try to give the conversation more life, so to speak

9154675
I get that. But it might be distracting for other readers as well. Just trying to give advice, not attacking your writing.

9247340
You're not the first.........or second.....or third person to tell me that. I appreciate the comment though, I guess