Flight Of The Avali: Draft 1

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rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #1 · Aug 22nd, 2017 · · · Chapter 7 ·

I think I told you this before, but the DBZA references kill the mood of the sex.
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You'll be avoiding them during sex scenes in the new version, right?

Patric12345

Patric12345 #2 · Aug 22nd, 2017 · · · Chapter 7 ·

8381487
Yes. This was a much different time.

rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #3 · Aug 22nd, 2017 · · · Chapter 7 ·

8381504
But there will still be DBZA references?

Patric12345

Patric12345 #4 · Aug 22nd, 2017 · · · Chapter 7 ·

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If one comes up in a decent way. I won't try to force any references in as those can ruin it too.

rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #5 · Aug 22nd, 2017 · · · Chapter 7 ·

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The most situationally applicable would probably be, "It doesn't bother me. It doesn't bother me. It bothers me. It bothers me a lot! AND THAT ONE'S STILL <insert point of rage here>!"

You can work it to almost anything and it'll be funny, even to the people unfamiliar with TFS.

WardenTheEternalWatcher