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duckboy416


I loooooove books. It's said that I could read before I coud speak! So I became a brony and dove right in after heard of this website

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I see promise of fuckery in this, both the comedic and the sexual.

Well, this is an interesting beginning. The main OC seems a little too accepting of this, but meh. I'll see where this goes.

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Oh? Well, how would you react at 1:00 in the morning and some pony-shaped virus was talking at you like it wanted to be your friend, after several attempts to make it go away? Would you just make it go away by groggily giving it what it wants so that you could go the fuck back to sleep, or would you drink something caffeinated and try to go scorched earth on it?

I like how this is playing out so far. Has potential to be great

Finally! I've been looking for an interesting plot like this one and this just caught my attention! I like the introductions and I get the feeling that it's going to be amazing! Look forward for more chapters!

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Neither. I'd probably freak out and throw something at it.

This sounds like a great way to begin some very amusing nonsense.

It wasn’t bad but it was a little shorter than the previous one.

Please tell me that the real fun will begin in the next chapter!

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It will! I'm sorry for the slow buildup, but I promise you, you'll get some good stuff next chapter.

Hmmm, I like where this is going, but wow a futa Vinyl? I mean, I don't mind futas but it depends. Nonetheless, I look forward to see more of this, and hope you won't take too long because I'm sure there will be a clop scene in the next chapter.

One question though, how small is Vinyl in this story?

Question can I use this premise in a story of my own? If not that's cool but I'd really love to make a similar story. I wouldn't steal things and I'd definitely credit you as the original creator of the idea, if it's not cool then I dunno what I'll do other than beg for you to change your mind.

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I'm fine with it. Just credit me for the idea. :D

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Of course, I'll probably use a different Vinyl if I use her at all but I will definitely credit you. I'm actually just finally getting back into writing mlp stories again so this would be something I could use to relax when not focusing on my main two stories. Thanks for letting me use the idea and I'll be crediting you in the first chapter and the author's notes of every chapter if that's cool.

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Sounds good. I hope you go through with this, and do it well, as I happened to notice you have a lot of unfinished ideas in your Stories.

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I'm actually working on the second chapter of this, and working on the next chapter in my most liekd story wolfish writer in equestria right now. I just can't write during the day because family is on the computer, but after that's all said and done I write at night and when non one's around, until I get a new laptop in which case I'll finally be back to a regular updating schedule and updating everything I have started. Chapter 1 is up if you want to check it out.

Ok just to be clear, cause im a bit lost here since there are no fetish tags. This story is gonna have Futa in it right?

Alright, wait a just a goddamn second because I'm so confused. The mare who was chatting with was Vinyl? Then who the hell is the mare who was sleeping in his lap?!?!?!

And how the hell he could hid the mare from the eyes of his classmates just as he got out of the classroom?!

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Correct. I'll fix this sometime later. Nice pony Artorias, btw.

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The helpdesk AI pony from the computer. I haven't named her yet, which is probably predominantly what's confusing you.

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Sheer dumb luck.

Comment posted by francisthewitcher deleted Feb 15th, 2019

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You seriously name who’s saying or chatting because it’s so confusing dude. Also you have to explain about the final part

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No!!! I mean how he avoided other people saw the pony when he got out of the classroom(!?!?!!??? Explain!!!

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You're getting really worked up about this. Chillax, fam.

Comment posted by Facastratex deleted Feb 15th, 2019

This is getting really interesting...

It's been awhile, but I would def love to see any more chapters, if you have them. I really enjoy what you have so far Kind of hoping our human protagonist gets his brains reamed out. Not gonna lie. :-)

Excellent story keep up the good work and I give this story a 10 out of 90

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