9787182 Were there any errors that especially stood out for you in the chapter? I'm just curious. Unfortunately, my main forte is technical writing, and I've struggled with actual story writing ever since I started writing fan-fic stuff back in 2010/2011.
9787818 Alright, there's one big mistake you should notice, is how you're writing the "O" instead of "Oh" in the dialogues and some parts of your narration.
9787918 Ahh, gotcha. I'm used to the letter O vs. Oh. I looked it up real quick and it seems that O is acceptable, however it's an archaic form of Oh. I'll be more mindful about those types of things. Thank you for the heads up.
You know, I'm not usually a fan of the isekai genre, but since it's rare to find some good stories like this, I'm willing to give this a chance.
But let me give you an advise as a writer, before you post a new chapter, read the whole to find some errors so you can improvise.
Nice, i always love a good story with amazonian ponies :) keep it up dude :)
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Amazonian, plus ABS, that is a good shit.
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Were there any errors that especially stood out for you in the chapter? I'm just curious. Unfortunately, my main forte is technical writing, and I've struggled with actual story writing ever since I started writing fan-fic stuff back in 2010/2011.
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Alright, there's one big mistake you should notice, is how you're writing the "O" instead of "Oh" in the dialogues and some parts of your narration.
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Ahh, gotcha. I'm used to the letter O vs. Oh. I looked it up real quick and it seems that O is acceptable, however it's an archaic form of Oh. I'll be more mindful about those types of things. Thank you for the heads up.
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Anytime. Hey, one question, will the next chapters will be longer? It's just I'm not used with 1k chapters