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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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This story is a sequel to A Tale of Two Lovebirds


Gallus and Silverstream have been a couple for a while now, but their relationship seems to have been nothing but smooth sailing. However, every relationship goes through challenges, and theirs is no exception.

Taking advantage of a recent break from school, Silverstream decides now is the perfect time to show off her new boyfriend to her family. So she brings Gallus along to Mount Aris, and also opts to take him to Seaquestria.

But while Silverstream is ecstatic and overjoyed to be home, Gallus is more than a little nervous at once again being on unfamiliar territory. It doesn't help that he knows Silverstream's aunt is Queen Novo, the ruler of both kingdoms.

What will Silverstream's family think of Gallus when they meet him? And will Gallus' fears get the best of him?

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I am sorry, I merely saw the title and immediately though "Who is Aris and why is that gryphon mounting her?"

I'll see myself out. And maybe read this story as repayment for this joke.

You even helped me get Edith house trained.

I bet that was an adventure and a half.

If I disappeared off the face of the world, Grandpa Gruff wouldn't care

And yet Gruff was among those most vocally wondering where the missing students were

Now that those monsters at Hasbro killed our Sandbar/Gallus ship, it seems this one is becoming more popular. I don't mind that at all.

A couple of critics 1) Ocean Flow's title would be Princess-Regent, as she a princess (younger sister of a queen) and a regent (a person tasked to rule a domain in a monarch's stead as the monarch is often not of age or otherwise incapacitated)
2) Gallus' torso would take on the look of a lion, as Silverstrem's horse half shifted to be her torso and head and her lower half became fish, it would steam to reason that Gallus' lion lower half would become a fish and his upper half would become a lion

So their friends know but now the lovebirds must tell their teachers and counselor and give their approval.

I'd love to read about Gallus and Silverstream housetraining Edith.

If Novo actually did turn him into a Newt, she'd be in so much trouble from at least 2 nations.

Gallstream is always something good to enjoy any day! :heart::pinkiehappy::raritywink::twilightsmile::yay::ajsmug::rainbowwild:

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And yet Gruff was among those most vocally wondering where the missing students were

Probably because of obligation as the eldest griffon, rather than actually being concerned about Gallus.

A royal figure like Novo wouldn't talk like that... :applejackconfused::derpyderp1::pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::raritydespair::trixieshiftleft::twilightoops::unsuresweetie:

Good story.
You described well emotions and behaviours of all characters.

Have you ever heard of show, don’t tell? Most of this fanfic consists of characters talking about how they’re feeling, or things that happen in canon. Also, Terramar has his own tag.

10166066 I know, but the other tag also includes Queen Novo since she has an important role as well.

"Gallus, why in the world would they ever think anything other than positive thoughts?" Silverstream commented. "I've already written several letters to them about our relationship. You even helped me get Edith house trained."

Gasp Edith aww so she adopted the cockatrice thats cool

"It helps that I'm part bird, kind of like you," Silverstream chirped. "Maybe someday we'll even get married, and have little chicks of our own to take care of."

Whoa ok slow down silverstream you guys are still kids

Gallus nodded his head. "I'd expect that from Ocellus, not from you. Still, at least you've got others who care about you. If I disappeared off the face of the world, Grandpa Gruff wouldn't care," He sighed. "That's exactly what I'm so worried, I'm a nobody. Just some random orphan the griffons tossed at Headmare Twilight. You on the other claw, you're the queen's niece, and you've got the head of the navy as your chaperone."

Aww gallus come on now don't sell yourself like that you're a better Griffin dude

Sky Beak smiled again as he nodded his head. "Couldn't have put it better myself. I fully respect my wife's decision, but just as she enjoys being a seapony, I enjoy being a hippogriff. I still come back to visit her as much as possible though, and she can see me whenever she wants. All she has to do is come up to the beach."

Ohh ok that makes sense

"How about a game of hide and go seek?" Terramar suggested. "There's a lot of great hiding places you can find down here, it's actually really easy to get lost."

I remember there was a story that he got lost when he was a very little during the storm Kings Rampage

Well it looks like silverstream and Gallus are visiting her home to meet with the family which he was pretty nervous especially meeting with royalties but silverstream wants to reassure and that he's got nothing to worry about and they will like him he's still not sure but he trusts silverstream word so it looks like they met up with her father Sky beak on the land and it looks like they're going to meet up with Terramar and it looks like they got an extra Pearl for Gallus so that he can swim and breathe down there which that helps and it looks like they finally meet up with their mother ocean flow which they look like they will meet up with Queen Novo very soon and that makes him even more nervous now the queen of both sea and land is visiting them I wonder how this will work out for him guess we'll find out

Well then it looks like they finally made it to the throne room where Queen Novo is waiting I'm surprised we didn't see skystar where did she go but anyway Gallus was pretty nervous around her and silverstream wanted her and to trust her that gallus really love her and care for her which that was pretty sweet that she defended him and queen Novo agrees but of course do not cross with her when you break silverstream's heart she will get even I would not blame her but she can trust him he's a good one but anyway this was a pretty good story I was kind of hoping that skystar be there but this was good keep up the good work

Beautiful story about romance and acceptance from the girl's side of the family; so cute!

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