I am a pegisister, Steven Universe fan, Wings of fire fan, Warriors cats fan, and Avengers fan. And i'm also a She-ra fan. a MY Pride fan too.
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Blue Electric is a bat pony with a tragic backstory. Will she ever truly be alright or will she have nightmares forever? Join her journey as she has a mysterious dream, fall in love, and as she saved Equestria's best fliers and her friends from danger.
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Okay, I'm kinda surprised Nobody else commented on this story, well this chapter was pretty good, sad for blue tho
Okay, good chapter, short but okay, also this is getting depressing, but I shall read on
Okay, good chapter, a few mistakes and all, but why did blue just, die? I mean why did she stop breathing and needed starlight to give her CPR?
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It's these nightmares she been having. They sometimes get worse and she has no control. She doesn't die but she will stop breathing. In the later chapters you will find out how long she gets trapped in them. Princess Luna won't help because she mostly sleeps during the day.
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Okay, thanks
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No problem. And thanks for commenting on this story.
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Your welcome
Im enjoing this story a fair bit. Just the teansy bit of grammer and spelling. Id recomend you to read through it and make sure it sounds right. It might help getting someone else as an editor. And for formatting id recomend read some other books on here and copy that style(like seperating speach paragraphs from non speach) and to remember 1 sentence can count as a paragraph in a story. Im looking forward to the next chapter
Good chapter, and happy endding!
Good happy chapter, good work
I agree with Rainbowderp20_12 good story so far even with the few mistakes and all, please keep going I Really do like this story
Pretty good chapter bud
Pretty good, and good to see you're back buddy
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Blue Electric: Jennifer Paz the voice of Lapis Lazuli. Brownie Batter: Kelly Clarkson. Macadamia Nut: a mixture of Mr.Cake and Trenderhoof. Ace: Michaela Dietz who also voices Amethyst. And Snickerdoodle: Kaitlyn Maher. Also Miss Era's voice would be Deedee Magno Hall.