• Member Since 14th Jul, 2012
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DashFire61


Emotionally unstable and liable to drag you down with me.... It could be fun right?.........right?

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Life has a way of waiting until you feel like you're on top of the world before pushing you off the ledge, but what doesn't kill you either makes you stronger... or succeeds in the second attempt.

Chris was transported to a strange new world 3 years ago and has been struggling to find his place in it while battling insecurity. Admist it all he was content with his life if he still felt out of place. But when it's all torn from him he'll find motivation in his sorrow and strength in a new purpose and new friends.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

This is a Intresting start I will see where this goes

The chapter is, overall, not bad but it’s also not great.
The reason being that there are a number of easy-to-correct errors: wordy paragraphs, missing punctuations, spelling errors/bad word choice.
The chapter is rough and in need of some refining, is what I’m trying to say, but it’s still a decent start.

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