//------------------------------// // Ch.14: The Way The Cookie Crumbles Pt1 // Story: Blue Electric's Destiny // by Blueelectric //------------------------------// Spitfire and Blue were on a train ride to Manehatten with all of Blue's friends. They were getting ready to see Blue's other fillyhood friend, Brownie Batter and her family. They all got there own private booths and Spitfire and Blue decided to share one together. The booth got a nice comfortable bed and a bench for them to sit in. The couple were in the bed, cuddling with each other. Blue giggled at the joke Spitfire was telling and kissed her. She rest her head on her chest and sighed with content. "You have to try my friend's strawberry filled brownies. They are the best." Spitfire caress her face. " I guess I will." She said as she booped her nose, making her giggle. Spitfire lifted her face and kissed her. She felt Blue prodded her lips with her tongue and she open her mouth to comply. She felt fire in her heart as she felt her lover's tongue slipped in. Spitfire then slipped her own tongue into Blue's mouth, their tongues meet in a dance. Spitfire twitched her wings as Blue teased them with her hooves. They soon parted, needing to take a breath. Blue smiled and laid her head back on her chest. She soon fell asleep. Spitfire smiled at the mare and kissed her forehead. She wrapped her forelegs around her and buried her nose into her neck. She sighed as she traced her scars with her hoof. The train soon pulled up to the Manehatten train station and all eight mares hopped off. It was late at night. They walk through the station and out of the door. Blue widened her eyes as she she gazed around at the large city. One large poster on the biggest building has a picture of green cat eyes. Spitfire flagged down a large pony drawn cab and everypony hopped on. The cab pony was surprise at the large group of mares "Take us to Brownie and Macadamia's cookie shop please." Blue told the pony. The pony nodded and galloped on through the city. "Oh, this is simply exciting!" Squealed Rarity as her eyes twinkle at Blue. "The last time we ever came here is on a Friendship mission, now were back to help out a new friend!" "Thanks Rarity." Blue said. Rarity smiled and closed her eyes with pleasure. "Definitely!" Pinkie Pie chimed in. "I can't wait to try some of Brownie Batter's treats. I already came to prepare!" She got out a gigantic bag of bits. Blue widened her eyes. "Were did you even get this money?" She asked, flabbergasted. The pink mare just shrugged. "Being a party pony is big business." She exchange glances with Spitfire who shrugged. "Do ya think she has any snickerdoodle cookies?" Asked Applejack. "There mah favorite!" She licked her lips in anticipation. Rainbow Dash narrowed her eyes in disbelief. "I thought you only like apple flavored stuff." The farm pony glared at her. "Not everything about me is apple related." She said matter of factually. "Well, your name and job is apple related." Rainbow stated. They both started to growl at each other. "Girls! Get a hold of yourselves! We're here to support Blue, not arguing about cookies!" Scolded Twilight. The cab soon pulled up to a two story white building with brown trimmings. The logo got a picture of a brown batpony and tan unicorn that had the words "Brownie Batter and Macadamia's Cookie Shop!" Surrounding the picture in brown font. "I guess this is the place." Said Blue. They all got off and Blue gave the cab driver a bag of bits for the tip. "Thanks!" He shouted as he trotted away. They trotted forward with Blue in the lead. Blue paused at the door and gulp nervously. Spitfire put a protective wing over her. "What's the problem, love?" She asked softly. The batpony took a deep breath. "I'm so nervous. Brownie got a filly and I don't know if she's going to like me." Spitfire gave her fillyfriend an encouraging nuzzle. "She haven't even met you yet. I'm sure she'll like you." Blue nodded and with enough courage she open the door, making the bell ring. Blue paused and took a deep breath, finding the scent of baked goods comforting. Loads of cookies and brownies were in dishes in the front on display. The sweets was also in packages, were on the shelves surrounding the interior with the same logo as the store. A tall lanky tan unicorn stallion with pale yellow and white mane and hazel eyes was up at front near the cash register. He got macadamia nuts as his cutie mark. He look up and smile. "You must be Brownie's sister. She told me all about you." He greeted. "Honey! Looks who's here!" He shouted towards the back. A brown batpony mare with long, wavy, darker brown mane and brown eyes walked out. She got a bowl of brownie batter as her cutie mark. She was wearing a white apron with batter splattered all over it. Her eyes sparkled with delight. "Blue!" She flew forward and tackled the black batpony. Blue giggled and hugged her back. "It's good to see you too, Brownie." Pinkie giggled and joined in on the tackle hug. Brownie look at the pink mare with shock. "Is that Pinkie Pie !?" She hopped off Blue and gave her a hoofshake. "Big fan!" Pinkie grinned as wide as unponyly possible. "I got a fan!" She squealed in delight. The rest of her friends laughed in amusement. "Also Spitfire the Wonderbolt's captain, Princess Twilight, and the other Elements. Blue where do you even find these ponies!" Brownie asked, flabbergasted. Blue just smiled. "Oh, I have my ways. Also Spitfire is now my marefriend." Brownie hugged her tightly. "I am so happy for you, Blue. And I see you've met my husband, Macadamia Nut." She said as the unicorn walk up towards her. Blue dipped her head in greetings towards the stallion. "It's so nice to meet you." "Like wise." Macadamia said with a smile. Brownie walk towards the door and flip the "Open" sign to "Closed". "I'm closing up anyways." Said Brownie. "Now who wants to see our little girl?" She went behind the cash register and got out a bag of cookies. They follow the couple upstairs to a three bedroom apartment. "Snickerdoodle! We got guests!" Shouted Brownie. They heard hoofsteps coming from one of the rooms and the door opened. An adorable batpony filly walked out. She got a tan coat and cinnamon colored wavy mane and tail. Her wings are also that color. What stand out was her golden eyes. They were glazed over. Blue gasped and lifted her hoof to her mouth. "She's blind?" Brownie nodded sadly. "She was born that way, unfortunately. But that doesn't mean we love her any less." Blue took a breath and walk towards her. "Hi there, little one. You can call me Blue." She introduced as she crouch to her level. Snickerdoodle smiled. "I know. Mama told me all about you. And you seem to brought friends" "I can sense that you are afraid I wouldn't like you. But don't worry Auntie Blue, I can see your aura and I can tell you are good pony. I like you!" She continued as she hugged Blue's leg. Applejack was looking confused. "Ah thought she was blind. How can she 'see' auras?" She asked. The batfilly turn her attention to the farm pony. "I am blind. I can't see objects, but I can see auras. They are also known as feelings." Her father shrugged. "Her foal docter didn't understand either. I'm guessing that's her special gift. " Twilight looked intrigued. "That sounds intresting and amazing at the same time. It's like her gift makes up for her lost sight." Pinkie Pie rushed forward. "Hi Snickers! Can I call you Snickers? Snickerdoodle sounds like a long name! Anyway's I'm Pinkie Pie, one of Equestria's best party pony!" She rambled. Snickerdoodle was taken back by the pink pony's energetic nature. She backed away a little. "Sure. I don't mind." She said. "Is she always like this?" She whispered to Blue. The black batpony rolled her eyes. "Plenty of times. I guess that's what happens if you eat to much sugar." Snickerdoodle sniffed the air. "Do I smell snickerdoodle cookies?" She asked. With a squeal of excitement she ran up to her mother. "Give me! Give me!" She chanted. Brownie dropped the bag and pulled it out of her reach for a few seconds. "Now none of that." She scolded. "What's the magic word?" The filly groan. "Please?" Brownie smiled and pushed the bag towards her daughter. "That's my girl. Can I have a kiss on the cheek too?" Snickerdoodle blushed. "But mama, there's other ponies watching." She complained. But she gave in and fluttered up and kissed her mother's brown cheek. "Awe!" Cooed all the other ponies in the room. She landed back on the ground and grabbed a cookie from the bag. She began to gobbled up quickly when her mother stopped her. "Slow down, Doodles. You're going to choke." She chided her. Snickerdoodle nodded and slowed down her bites. Blue was watching her with adoration in her eyes. Spitfire smiled and put her wing over her. "Cute kid, eh?" Blue nodded and laid her head on her shoulder. "Definitely, love." She reached forward and kissed her. Snickerdoodle paused from her treat and smiled at them. She then smirked. "If you d'awwed at me, you should do the same to them. Their love for each other is so strong." It was Spitfire and Blue's turn to blush. Spitfire smirked back at her. "Cocky little thing, are ya?" Snickerdoodle shook her head. "I'm five and I don't know what that word means." The adults laughed. "She's smart for five." Commented Fluttershy.