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I like how well written this is. Is there a sequel in the works, or possibly a story involving Twilight and Cadance? Cadance has fallen for Twilight after she ascended and is afraid to acknowledge those feelings since she is married to Twilights brother, it would make for a good plotline.
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Not planned, but who knows what might happen if the muses bite?
Just want to point out that a quarter moon and a "half moon" are the same thing. The term you're probably looking for is "waning"
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It would be waxing, actually, given that it's at the "getting bigger" part of the process, rather than "getting smaller."
However, edited the title.
Contest judge.
Just wanted you to know I liked the build up and the story. The dialogue is great. At first I was unsure of the sub-plot involving Raven and her sister, but ultimately I appreciated it. You gave it exactly the attention it needed to feel meaningful to the plot and, most importantly, no more attention than needed.
Watching the banter between the sisters was a lot of fun as well.
But most of all, it was enjoyable to go through Luna's journey. Keeping the story grounded in third limited from Luna's PoV helped a lot in cementing the experience and keeping it grounded.
Oh, and I totally caught the Venus Spring cameo before you mentioned her by name. How could I miss the soup bowl?
All in all, a fun story. Thanks.
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i.imgur.com/hoHBE.png
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Hopefully means you liked the line?
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It means you made a spelling/grammar error.
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Ah, missed the bolding - thank you! THAat, however, was a stylistic/speech pattern choice. More archaic way of speaking, but this is still thee-speak Luna, after all. :)
Was Luna trying time raise the sun, or was that a typo?
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Thaaaaat was a typo. Oops!
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Glad to help