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Twilight Star


Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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This story is a sequel to The Fall of Twilight Sparkle


It is only a few years before Daybreaker is released from her banishment, and Luna has yet to find the hero who will save her corrupt sister. But one day, a unicorn catches her attention, and Luna decides to make her student, by the time Luna passes with her pupil, she sees that this unicorn is very different from Twilight Sparkle and sees that this may be the future hero who will save her sister.

Background belong to Stelar-eclipse
Sunset Shimmer vector belong to Elsia-Pony

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 20 )

It's kinda sad reading this cuz it really wonder, what would Sunset be like if she was happy growing up...

Short, but decent, Garble is so me in the mornings :rainbowlaugh:

Thus, “My Little Pony: Alternate Universe” begins.

do you intentionally use wrong words in your stories. don't get me wrong i like your stories well written for the most part but some of the words you used don't exactly fit in. like hull instead of hoof.

In this AU, all ponies are nocturnal, if you don't know this.

what about thestrals?

I would’ve preferred the dragon to be Smolder.

Sunset Shimmer was still out of control of her magic. Until, she felt a comforting hull on her back.

Hoof!

“Garble”, replied Sunset Shimmer.

Why does that sound familiar?

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I just corrected it. Sorry if my old stories have errors and the chapter are shorter :twilightsheepish:

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What are thestrals? The bat ponies? I don't know about them. Maybe they are dayternal(?).

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Me, too, except the pigging out part!

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first yes thestrals are bat-ponies. second dayternal is not a word the correct term is diurnal. third i just thought of a third option the thestrals could be crepuscular which mean only active during twilight hours which would be between dawn and sunrise, and sunset and dusk.

p.s. no Simpsons memes.

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