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Israel Yabuki


Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories

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I have to say that this is a intresting story. keep up the good work.

I wonder how Twilight is gonna react to this... probably gonna freak the fuck out :rainbowlaugh:
Also, finally! a Midnight Sparkle story that doesn't involve futa, lesbian and other bullshit fetishes.

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Lesbian's not that bad, but I wholeheartedly agree on the futa front.

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...do you have a problem with the fetishes of futa and lesbian?

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Its just that everytime there's a Midnight S. clop story its always lesbian,lesbian,lesbian... its just too much! so im really happy to see one where she's being paired up with a guy for once.

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As a matter of fact, yes, there's simply way too much of both and im sick of it, especially when it comes to Midnight S. she gets thrown into both categories all the time. Im just glad that someone finally decided to break the mold. And the fact that its IsraelYabuki who's doing it is just the cherry on top, he makes really good quality stuff.

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Honestly, futa is a generally big problem in my eyes. What the hell is so arousing about chicks with dicks? It's honestly more sick than hot.

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Even though Midnight is being paired with a guy, I have no doubts there will be at least some lesbianism during the story. Maybe not involving Midnight, but still...

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To each their own fetish. I have no problem with futa, personally, but I won't badmouth you for disliking it.

There's no futa in this fic, but I did include Twilight x Sunset since a lot of people like to ship them.

I'm looking forward on getting to know, Midnight Sparkle. :fluttershysad:

Wow!

Android: Ooh! This is gonna get good! *takes some popcorn and starts eating it*

Heh just wait guys this story is just getting started so keep an eye out for the next chapter and brony on.

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So is chance going to bang midnight sparkle or twilight sparkle and Sunset and midnight

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Sunset and Twilight are already dating, so Chance is only gonna be with Midnight

5’11 inches tall.

I don't suppose you mean feet? It would be rather strange to be 5.11 inches tall or 511 inches tall. :twilightoops:

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Oh I see! Thanks for clearing that up. :twilightsmile:

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I did not know that, but tell me, do you feel lucky having your name in this story?

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My name, height, and age...


Are you stalking me?

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No, it was just a bunch of random selections

Hopefully the next chapter comes out soon. This is pretty interesting.

Well now... This is gonna get interesting! :raritystarry: Hope to read the next chapters soon! Tracking and liking!

Ooh! Can't wait for the next chapter! Awesome work, Israel Yabuki!

I had my doubts at first about this story but upon another reading, I love it

This is good and Im enjoying it but there is a hell of a lot of unnecessary detail for every single thing chance does.

I nodded. “Sure.” Then I went back to the kitchen and grabbed a cup from one of the cupboards and placed it underneath my water dispenser and filled it up with some fresh, filtered water
After that, I brought it back to Midnight and sat down next to her.

This whole bit could just be

I nodded. “Sure.” Then I went back to the kitchen and grabbed her a cup of water

I just feel like leaving out some of the more mundane details like this would help the story flow a lot better.

can wait for the ending you should end it with the song dearly beloved from kingdom hearts recoded :pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile:

The emotions are so strong.

"Upset is an understatement. When the court date arrived, my parents denied ever putting their hands on me, but when I testified, my dad tried to grab me and choke me to death. The judge sentenced my dad to death via electric chair, but my mom got a life sentence with no chance of parole. In that one moment before she was carted off to prison, she gave me one last look and mouthed out these words: "I'm sorry, Chance. I never should have abandoned you, be strong, sweetie. I cried so hard that day, I was in pieces when the harsh reality had finally hit me: I had no parents to watch over me and my mom showed remorse after all the pain she had inflicted on me," I keep going.

This little part actually make me cry a little bit great job IsraelYabuki

Sweet beans in a basket, Pinkie, you scared the dickens out of me!” I said,

Sweet shit on a stick, where was this guy raised? Buckingham palace?

The judge sentenced my dad to death via electric chair

Well that’s a horrible way to die.

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